Read my story...pleaseeee?!
Question: Read my story!.!.!.pleaseeee!?
hey everyone! this is my short story i wrote for my project, i got the idea for my story from one of the myspace bulletins, but I PROMISE, i didn't plagerize!. =] ummm!.!.!.!.i need you guys to check grammer and spelling, and any advice will be great!. =]
Add Me on Myspace!
[italics]Today I sit up here with my friend, and I open up the golden door that holds all my memories that I shared with my living soul!. When I look through the door I see my cute little chubby face that beamed on my parent’s face, I was 12 when I actually started my life, well at least I thought I did!. At age 12, I saw and learned too much of the world!. Most kids at that age starts to learn how to walk on their own on the right paths of the unfamiliar world!. Me…I was never taught to walk on my own in any paths, the wrong nor the right, and that was probably the biggest mistake of my life!. What can I do!? My dad was a drug addict; my mom worked late in order to afford the big house we owned, neither of them had enough time for me!. Especially when my parents divorced, and my dad left me, in that crisis my mom barely had enough time for herself!. I guess my sadness and loneliness was my entire fault, and so was my death!. I took advantage of my opportunities, and at last when there were none left, I thought there was never any!. This golden door was the key to my life, but I guess I was too much of a brat to notice anything like that!. I should’ve opened my heart, the opportunities were endless!. The stories of my life that I thought was useless were actually the most important ones…
Ava knew what to do as soon as the door closed!. Turn on the computer; log on aim, and myspace!. Ava was known as the “Myspace Dummy” since she was a myspace addict!. Although Ava knew that she should’ve cleaned her room before she turned the computer on!. Her room was so disorganized, just like her life!. She just didn’t take life as seriously as she should have, probably because she handled too much in life already!. Unlike most teens, Ava acts like the same old stubborn, fear free girl at home and at school!. Ava’s binder was so messed up, Spanish notes in the science section, math notes in Spanish section!. Ava’s homework are usually counted late just because of her careless-ness!.
As soon as Ava logged on aim, she started IM- ing her friend, Alimahh:
DayumAve (3:31:04 PM): wat’s gud Ava!?
Its Alimahh xD (3:31:27 PM): Nm…!.!. yuh!?
DayumAve (3:31:42 PM): nm……!.hey com ovah to mah house!
Its Alimahh xD (3:32:07 PM): iight fine, comin dere in 5 mins!.
DayumAve signed off at 3:32:35 PM!.
DayumAve is offline and will receive your IMs when signing back in!.
After five minutes, Ava arrived at Alimahh’s house Ava arrived at her childhood friend, Alimahh’s house!. Alimahh’s house smelled the same ever since the first day Ava visited it on Jan!. 5th, 1998, when she was only 4 yrs!. old!. It smelled like rose petals and even looked like a huge rose petal with all its pink and redness!. The mischievous best friends ran up to Alimahh’s room!. The computer was already on, so Ava just sat on the comfortable chair and typed in myspace!.com in the address bar!.
“Ava…you and myspace,” Alimahh rolled her eyes in a sarcastic type of voice, “don’t you have to be 16 or older to have an account!?”
Alimahh was more of the “be careful” type of person!. Unlike Ava who always followed the words: you have one life to live, try everything out and try to enjoy it!. No wonder Ava always got in trouble, but that is no problem because everyone still falls for her emerald green eyes and her long silky brown hair that went very well with her light skin tone!. Alimahh has nice sea blue eyes and short black hair that gave her the 80’s look!. Although look catches most guys’ attention, which is something that Alimahh didn’t care about!.
“Blah, Alimahh, I obviously lied about my age, duh,” Ava laughed at Alimahh’s innocence that probably made Ava jealous inside!.
“Then how do you know for sure that the people you talk to on myspace are the same age as they tell you!?”
“Oh shut up Alimahh, you little miss-goody-two-shoes wannabe!. Yo, check out this guy, he’s hot!” Ava pointed at a default picture of a random myspace page, “He seems very cool!. Lemme add him!.”
“Yo, you don’t even know him!. Why would you wanna talk to someone random dude!? Although darn…he is hot!. Let’s check him out!” While Alimahh was watching Ava compose a message to the random dude, she enjoyed Ava’s braveness to talk to a random dude!. Alimahh, herself wasn’t that brave, especially ever since her parents got divorced!. That is one thing the best friends had in common: they both had personal life issues such as divorced parents!. The issue of divorced parents made both of the girls insecure, except Ava didn’t let people notice that she was insecure inside, unlike Alimahh who can basically be described as an insecure girl!. Ava continued to type:
Subject: Hey, I’m Ava, add me on myspace…
Body: Yo,Www@Enter-QA@Com
Add Me on Myspace!
[italics]Today I sit up here with my friend, and I open up the golden door that holds all my memories that I shared with my living soul!. When I look through the door I see my cute little chubby face that beamed on my parent’s face, I was 12 when I actually started my life, well at least I thought I did!. At age 12, I saw and learned too much of the world!. Most kids at that age starts to learn how to walk on their own on the right paths of the unfamiliar world!. Me…I was never taught to walk on my own in any paths, the wrong nor the right, and that was probably the biggest mistake of my life!. What can I do!? My dad was a drug addict; my mom worked late in order to afford the big house we owned, neither of them had enough time for me!. Especially when my parents divorced, and my dad left me, in that crisis my mom barely had enough time for herself!. I guess my sadness and loneliness was my entire fault, and so was my death!. I took advantage of my opportunities, and at last when there were none left, I thought there was never any!. This golden door was the key to my life, but I guess I was too much of a brat to notice anything like that!. I should’ve opened my heart, the opportunities were endless!. The stories of my life that I thought was useless were actually the most important ones…
Ava knew what to do as soon as the door closed!. Turn on the computer; log on aim, and myspace!. Ava was known as the “Myspace Dummy” since she was a myspace addict!. Although Ava knew that she should’ve cleaned her room before she turned the computer on!. Her room was so disorganized, just like her life!. She just didn’t take life as seriously as she should have, probably because she handled too much in life already!. Unlike most teens, Ava acts like the same old stubborn, fear free girl at home and at school!. Ava’s binder was so messed up, Spanish notes in the science section, math notes in Spanish section!. Ava’s homework are usually counted late just because of her careless-ness!.
As soon as Ava logged on aim, she started IM- ing her friend, Alimahh:
DayumAve (3:31:04 PM): wat’s gud Ava!?
Its Alimahh xD (3:31:27 PM): Nm…!.!. yuh!?
DayumAve (3:31:42 PM): nm……!.hey com ovah to mah house!
Its Alimahh xD (3:32:07 PM): iight fine, comin dere in 5 mins!.
DayumAve signed off at 3:32:35 PM!.
DayumAve is offline and will receive your IMs when signing back in!.
After five minutes, Ava arrived at Alimahh’s house Ava arrived at her childhood friend, Alimahh’s house!. Alimahh’s house smelled the same ever since the first day Ava visited it on Jan!. 5th, 1998, when she was only 4 yrs!. old!. It smelled like rose petals and even looked like a huge rose petal with all its pink and redness!. The mischievous best friends ran up to Alimahh’s room!. The computer was already on, so Ava just sat on the comfortable chair and typed in myspace!.com in the address bar!.
“Ava…you and myspace,” Alimahh rolled her eyes in a sarcastic type of voice, “don’t you have to be 16 or older to have an account!?”
Alimahh was more of the “be careful” type of person!. Unlike Ava who always followed the words: you have one life to live, try everything out and try to enjoy it!. No wonder Ava always got in trouble, but that is no problem because everyone still falls for her emerald green eyes and her long silky brown hair that went very well with her light skin tone!. Alimahh has nice sea blue eyes and short black hair that gave her the 80’s look!. Although look catches most guys’ attention, which is something that Alimahh didn’t care about!.
“Blah, Alimahh, I obviously lied about my age, duh,” Ava laughed at Alimahh’s innocence that probably made Ava jealous inside!.
“Then how do you know for sure that the people you talk to on myspace are the same age as they tell you!?”
“Oh shut up Alimahh, you little miss-goody-two-shoes wannabe!. Yo, check out this guy, he’s hot!” Ava pointed at a default picture of a random myspace page, “He seems very cool!. Lemme add him!.”
“Yo, you don’t even know him!. Why would you wanna talk to someone random dude!? Although darn…he is hot!. Let’s check him out!” While Alimahh was watching Ava compose a message to the random dude, she enjoyed Ava’s braveness to talk to a random dude!. Alimahh, herself wasn’t that brave, especially ever since her parents got divorced!. That is one thing the best friends had in common: they both had personal life issues such as divorced parents!. The issue of divorced parents made both of the girls insecure, except Ava didn’t let people notice that she was insecure inside, unlike Alimahh who can basically be described as an insecure girl!. Ava continued to type:
Subject: Hey, I’m Ava, add me on myspace…
Body: Yo,Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
wow! you must have put a lot of work into do this!! its wonderful!! i could never come up with anything like that!! youve really proven a point too! i never add anybody i dont know on my myspace! too many bad things have happened with it!!! well!.!. you should really get a VERY good grade on this!.!. i love it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
that is amazing, to check for spelling and grammar move it to microsoft and check it there!.
wow, i really enjoyed that!. i really want to know how did so when you get your grade post it under your question!. this is really cool!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
wow, i really enjoyed that!. i really want to know how did so when you get your grade post it under your question!. this is really cool!.Www@Enter-QA@Com