What do you think of this horror film script that I wrote?!


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What do you think of this horror film script that I wrote?

Mrs. Gates-Doctor.
Victim #5
Victim #3
Victim #2/
Victim #1-Mr. Dover: CSI agent.
Victim #4
Victim #6

Scene 1-Living room.: Mrs. Gates is looking through autopsy reports that she has been working on for the past four weeks and decides that something is not right so she calls CSI agent Mr. Dover who was the one who discovered the dead body’s. Mr. Dover answers the phone: Hello? Mrs. Gates says: Yes, hello this is Mrs. Gates the Pathologist who has been working on the body’s that you found on September 28th Two Thousand and Seven, I request that you come to my home so I can tell you about the very strange reasons of death that I have discovered with these body’s I think there is something very very wrong......





Scene 2: living room: Mr. Dover knocks on door, Mrs. Gates answers. Mr. Dover- I’m sorry, but do you happen to be Mrs. Gates the pathologist? Mrs. Gates: Yes I am, and you are? Mr. Dover- I am Mr. Dover, I work with the CSI. Mrs. Gates: Oh, please do come in

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I have been looking forward to talking with you. Mrs. Gates: Make your self at home while I get the autopsy reports. Mrs. Gates: Walks to her bedroom to retrieve the reports which were lying on her bed, and then returns to the living room and sits down on the large couch while Mr. Dover is sitting on the love seat, and says take a look at these. After 5 seconds of looking over the reports Mr. Dover raises his head and says I agree there is something very very wrong, I wonder who could have done this. Mrs. Gates: It must have been some type of mad scientist. Mr. Dover: I agree, lets go over to the home in which I located these body’s and see if we can find any more details behind this case. Mr. Gates: But don’t you need to get a warrant for that? Mr. Dover: Well, yes I do, excuse me while I make a phone call. During Mr. Dover’s phone call: Mrs. Gates walks closer to the camera and whispers-What are we getting into??? And then the camera ventures over to the reports and finds all four

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of them having a picture of a face that is very badly burned with big bold letters next to them that say Cause of Death: Burned to death by highly toxic chemicals.



Scene 3: Car arrives at a home that is badly covered in cobwebs Mr. Dover and Mrs. Gates get out of vehicle and walk up to the front door and knock on it a few times and there is no response so Mr. Dover yells “This is the Police!” and then rams down the door and walks into the home and starts to look around the home for any more dead body’s and then all of a sudden a Clown walks into the room with a bottle of some type of glowing liquid in it’s hand, Mr. Dover attempts to pull out his gun but the clown throws the glowing liquid in his face and Mr. Dover’s face becomes severely burned (Reel FX). And then the clown looks in Mrs. Gates direction and Mrs. Gates yells Please Don’t kill me!!!! and the Clown walks over to Mrs. Gates and pulls a rope out of his pocket and ties Mrs. Gates hands behind her back and her feet

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together and carries her to a back room full of skeletons tied to different objects in the room. And she starts screaming and yelling and starts crying so the clown walks over to a dresser and picks out a role of Duct Tape from a tool box full of bloody tools and walks back over to Mrs. Gates and tapes her mouth shut. Then walks out of the room and slams the door shut behind him.

Scene 4: Later that day an elderly man who looks as if he has been working all day comes to the clowns home and wobbles up to the front door with his cane saying I need water I need water, and notices that there is no door so he wobbles into the home to find someone to ask for a drink of water and the clown shows it’s ugly face again and the elderly man asks please sir could I have a drink of water? The clowns murmurs yes you may and walks over to the fridge and pulls out a gallon of water and then pulls out a glass and pours the water into the glass and gives it to the elderly man and says drink up, who

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knows this could be your last drink. The elderly man laughs and says I may be old but I am not that old..... While the man is drinking the water the clown walks over to a table covered with vials with some kind of glowing liquid in it and picks one up and walks over and throws the liquid onto the mans face and when the man falls to the ground his face is severely burned. Then the clown walked into a bedroom and takes off his clown outfit and leaves the home in normal everyday clothes. But his face still has the makeup on it.
Scene 5: The next day: A family of 4 (_____1, ______2, _____3, and______4) are reading the newspaper when (______1) says hey look at this (the camera zooms into the newspaper which reads) “2 more body’s found dead! At an a banded home? and (______ 1)says this is the home where those other four body’s where found severely burned by some type of chemical. Then (____2) says: Hey, why don’t we go to the home and see what we can find. So the whole family agreed and

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then (_____3) asks do they have an address listed? And (_____1) said yes it does so everybody left the room to go get dressed and then they headed off to the home.

Scene 6: A car pulls into the driveway of the clown’s home and all four family members step out of the vehicle and heads to the front door, when they get there they discover there is none and they all say “that’s strange” and then they all stepped into the home and start searching and when they enter into the room in which Mrs. Gates is tied up in they run over to Mrs. Gates and takes the duck tape off her mouth and she struggles to say th....the clow....clown is in th....the clo.....closet and they all turn towards the closet door when the clown opens the door from the inside and runs out with a bottle of the glowing liquid in each hand and throws it in all of there faces and it kills everyone except for (_____2) who ducked when the clown threw the liquid at the group. The clown ran over and grabbed a large nail out of

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the tool chest when (______2) sees the nail is dripping blood she screams and runs and the clown chases after her while she is still screaming like mad and drives the large nail throw her hand (Reel F/X) but she is still screaming and running throw the house while her hand is dripping with a ton of blood so the clown runs and picks up a bow and arrow that was under the table the clown ran too and shoots (_____2) throw the heart (Reel F/X) and she falls on the ground where a pool of blood begins underneath her.



Scene 7: That night while the clown is sleeping the police come to his home and walk into the house and start searching the home and then walk into the room that Mrs. Gates is in and she struggles to say plea....please hel....help me the officer unties her then picks her up and walks her out to his undercover car and then asks what happened and she said the clow....clown kil...killed them all.... so the officer asked do you know where he is? She said he is in hi...his bed.

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....bedroom. So the officer ran into the house with his gun at the ready and ran into the bedroom and shoots the clown several times in the chest (Reel F/X) and the clown dies....well at least we think he did.....

Scene 8: When Mrs. Gates is about to start the autopsy the clown opens his eyes and reaches out and strangles Mrs. Gates.....

The End.........For now.

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I DID THIS IN AN HOUR OR SO THAT IS WHY IT IS NOT THAT GREAT THIS IS A ROUGH DRAFT NOT THE FINAL THINGS THANKS FOR THE IDEAS I WILL CHANGE THE POLICE STUFF I AM JUST SEEING WHAT PEOPLE THINK I CAN DO TO MAKE IT BETTER I THINK IT IS PRETTY GOOD FOR AN HOUR?


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Well, it's not really a script. More like an outline. Scripts are usually around 120 pages.


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