STUDIO PROJECT. Can you view this clip give me some feedback. best feed back 10p!
Question: STUDIO PROJECT!. Can you view this clip give me some feedback!. best feed back 10pts!?
Hey i am currently doing a studio project at uni and would like to have some constructive feedback!.
We have to make a short film in 13weeks!.
Right now i have made a short Teaser trying not to give too much away!.
We are making a zombie flick and this scene you will see is a dark hallway scene where one of the survivors is trying to find her way out!.
Well hope you like it!. Cheers in advanced
Daniel!.CWww@Enter-QA@Com
We have to make a short film in 13weeks!.
Right now i have made a short Teaser trying not to give too much away!.
We are making a zombie flick and this scene you will see is a dark hallway scene where one of the survivors is trying to find her way out!.
Well hope you like it!. Cheers in advanced
Daniel!.CWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
First of all, what I have seen certainly piqued my interest!. This is a movie I would watch!.
That said, I thought your definition at the beginning could be up for just a second more, to allow the reader enough time to read it without rushing!.
I had a couple of different impressions as I watched your actress pick her way through the bodies on the floor!. I had decided that she may have been in shock, and/or she knew she could wake up the bodies, so she was being cautious!.
At any rate, for some reason, when she got to the locked doors, there was something that I just was not buying!. I think it was the way she was trying the door handles!.
To me, you could tell she was an actress who knew the doors were going to be locked!. There was no perceived sense of urgency, and no feeling of dread as the creatures behind her began to stir!.
GOOD LUCK!Www@Enter-QA@Com
That said, I thought your definition at the beginning could be up for just a second more, to allow the reader enough time to read it without rushing!.
I had a couple of different impressions as I watched your actress pick her way through the bodies on the floor!. I had decided that she may have been in shock, and/or she knew she could wake up the bodies, so she was being cautious!.
At any rate, for some reason, when she got to the locked doors, there was something that I just was not buying!. I think it was the way she was trying the door handles!.
To me, you could tell she was an actress who knew the doors were going to be locked!. There was no perceived sense of urgency, and no feeling of dread as the creatures behind her began to stir!.
GOOD LUCK!Www@Enter-QA@Com
The actress does not react to the bodies rising behind her!. Why does she keep trying a door that is clearly locked!?
A POV shot intercut with the medium shots would have been more effective than the full shots intercut with the mediums!. You want the audience to experience the threat around the girl!. A full shot is too disconnected!.
As she turns around to find another exit and notices the rising bodies, you could dolly back through the bodies as the actress screams!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
A POV shot intercut with the medium shots would have been more effective than the full shots intercut with the mediums!. You want the audience to experience the threat around the girl!. A full shot is too disconnected!.
As she turns around to find another exit and notices the rising bodies, you could dolly back through the bodies as the actress screams!.Www@Enter-QA@Com