Can someone critique my short film? (actually entertaining)?!
Question: Can someone critique my short film!? (actually entertaining)!?
Answers:
That is the most ugliest woman I have ever seen in my life, next time find a real girl for the part!.
Movie would have been better with piano music, like in old silent movies, and slightly sped up!. Eye of the tiger was not necessary, scaring the ^^%%$$% out of me, out of nowhere, Lol,!. Audio fade in would have been nice!. The color of the film was a tad bland!.
But I'll give you a thumbs up, for effort and creativity, movie was entertaining!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Movie would have been better with piano music, like in old silent movies, and slightly sped up!. Eye of the tiger was not necessary, scaring the ^^%%$$% out of me, out of nowhere, Lol,!. Audio fade in would have been nice!. The color of the film was a tad bland!.
But I'll give you a thumbs up, for effort and creativity, movie was entertaining!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
You have to take it more seriously if you want it to be good!. Even comedy!. But you have some decent ideas, just really sloppy execution!. I know that you are kids with no budget, but effort doesn't cost anything!. Besides it'll be funnier to see you guys really trying to act than just hamming it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It was cute!. The mustache malfunction was funny!. Not getting camera in the mirror in the gym scene was good filming!. But it needed more music not just in the montage!. Outtake of the kiss was a good ending!. Keep working at it !. Your on the right track!.Www@Enter-QA@Com