Can anyone watch and critique my film?!
Question: Can anyone watch and critique my film!?
I have just produced this film for my very first time!. I do not have any experience whatsoever in the filming industry or editing!. This film was very low budget but I figure I have to start somewhere to get better!. If possible please watch part 1 and part 2 of my film and comment what you think of it!. Part I is only 8 minutes and 24 seconds long and Part II is 4 minutes and 25 seconds long!. The film is does not take long at all to watch!. part two will be seen as a response under part 1 in yellow!.
Again honest answers please!.!.!. I'm working to become a better director,editor, and producer!. Again this is my very first film to ever create/edit!.
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=3tdteev4L!.!.!.
also I apologize for filming this in a church!. I was doing a Shakespeare play (Tales of the Shrew) at the same time and decided to make a film for fun but had no intention on disrespecting the church or God!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Again honest answers please!.!.!. I'm working to become a better director,editor, and producer!. Again this is my very first film to ever create/edit!.
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=3tdteev4L!.!.!.
also I apologize for filming this in a church!. I was doing a Shakespeare play (Tales of the Shrew) at the same time and decided to make a film for fun but had no intention on disrespecting the church or God!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Not bad!. Next time get a tripod and work on the composition of your shots!. By doing this it will allow you to build a story and control the tension in each shot!. Check this out for some of what I mean!. http://www!.learner!.org/interactives/cine!.!.!.
Now, this means more work!. You'll need to story-board shots, but it will allow you to build a visual story, like a comic book, which is what a movie is!. Watch your favorite movie and see how the director build the story shot by shot!. In close when you want to see how people react, far away when people need to know what's around them!. Keep at it! You have talent!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Now, this means more work!. You'll need to story-board shots, but it will allow you to build a visual story, like a comic book, which is what a movie is!. Watch your favorite movie and see how the director build the story shot by shot!. In close when you want to see how people react, far away when people need to know what's around them!. Keep at it! You have talent!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hmmm okay:
Criticism: I recommend investing on an external mic, as it'll help you catch the sound better without the background noise (cars, etc), as it's a little hard to hear at first!. I found the slo-mo a bit frustrating at times also!.
I enjoyed it though, keep making movies! :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Criticism: I recommend investing on an external mic, as it'll help you catch the sound better without the background noise (cars, etc), as it's a little hard to hear at first!. I found the slo-mo a bit frustrating at times also!.
I enjoyed it though, keep making movies! :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Its really good :)
I have No critizims!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I have No critizims!.Www@Enter-QA@Com