What do you think of these lyrics? Its a fast upbeat rockstarish!?!
Question:
What do you think of these lyrics? Its a fast upbeat rockstarish!?
You make me feel like a monster like Im bout to explode!
You make me feel this way cause you always get your way!
My life is locked its called my cage ya turned me into a monster!
This is what I get for bening my self you turned me into a monster
This is what I gotta pay for being my own way!
My life is locked its called my cage you turned me into a monster!
Is there anything i shoud add? take away? PS I am only 10!
Answers:
its not bad for a ten year old, not to treat you like a child or anything! Keep working at it! It definitely has the potential to be a really rockin song. Try working out some beats on a keyboard to go with it!