How was this rap?!
Question:
How was this rap?
this is real hip hop right here blood sweat and tears
right in your ear
rappers in fear their contract ends in a year
thees things are just not clear
i make music to talk to the whole world
rappers rap in a whole world of drama with no control
the whole world walkin around not realizin
that their favorite rappers rappers verse wasnt written by him
rappers brainstormin like jimmy neutron and recordin any dance
with a superhero stance
they spend all they money on cars and diamonds unresponsibly
then they bring it in the game
and mothers start to blame this hip hop thang
many children havent met there mom or dads and now they mad
did i mention that kids with no influnce join a gang?
mothers dont understand so they protest and ban
it's a mystery how alotta real mc's never make it in history
it doesnt make sence to me why people envy me
be honest on how it was and where i need to improve Additional Details
16 hours ago
i didn't use a beat
16 hours ago
i don't want to be famous or have a rap career its just something i do
Answers: 16 hours ago
i didn't use a beat16 hours ago
i don't want to be famous or have a rap career its just something i do TIght..if i may suggest
were its iTALK to the whole world, try putting teach
and try changing the last two words...but damn man u got sum skill..
Hope you make it big if you reall sirous about diz yes if somebody raps it and it ryhmes Do u no what the beat is so I can help?
2 quarters, 1 half, an eighth?
I thought it was pretty good. Nice rhyming. I suck at that. That was nearly flawless my man. Pretty good. i didnt like this part:\
rappers rap in a whole world of drama with no control
the whole world walkin around not realizin
that their favorite rappers rappers verse wasnt written by him
but the rest was good that was a rhyming piece of crap!!! Dude, don't become (or try to become) a rapper.....it will NOT and I repeat will NOT happen
good luck in the buisness world! :)
My friend and I can rap soo much better than that and were girls and we were in 4th grade when we made our own raps except the one thing dif. about yours and ours is that ours is ssa-weet! dont listen to the guy on top of me i thought it was great i make music to talk to the whole world
.. i agree with i forget who else but that should say teach it might sound a little better..the rest is fine ! Wow...I'm impressed!! I think that you have some talent.