I write songs, what do you think of these lyrics?!
Question: For a song called:The Hard way
Hidden that secret for way to long
You thought I didn’t know
What you were doing
Behind my back
I found out the hard way
Not to trust guys like you
Not to believe when they say they love you
I found out the hard way
That you’ve gotta get revenge
Before it’s too late
And now it’s too late
What a fool I have been
I believed you wanted me forever
What a jerk you’ve been
I know what you did now
By certain chance
You slipped up and told the truth
And now I know what you did to me
Oh______
Chorus
How could you have done that to me?
How could you cheat me like that?
Why didn’t you just let me go?
Why couldn’t you have told me the truth before___________
Chorus
It's about when I found out my BF was cheating on me...the chorus is the 2nd section
Answers: For a song called:The Hard way
Hidden that secret for way to long
You thought I didn’t know
What you were doing
Behind my back
I found out the hard way
Not to trust guys like you
Not to believe when they say they love you
I found out the hard way
That you’ve gotta get revenge
Before it’s too late
And now it’s too late
What a fool I have been
I believed you wanted me forever
What a jerk you’ve been
I know what you did now
By certain chance
You slipped up and told the truth
And now I know what you did to me
Oh______
Chorus
How could you have done that to me?
How could you cheat me like that?
Why didn’t you just let me go?
Why couldn’t you have told me the truth before___________
Chorus
It's about when I found out my BF was cheating on me...the chorus is the 2nd section
Sounds Great! When you get the Grammy I want an invite to the after party! I promise not to streak the ceremony this time ;-)
i REALLY like that!!! Its got that certain thing that great singers have when you listen to there songs
It seems really good, the lyrics. It really describes what you feel, I think that with music, this song really has impact.
What a great piece! Music production is an art that few people are able to grasp. I like the way you express yourself, you definitely put your soul into these lyrics and it successfully conveys the message, that is, the devastating pain you have gone through and the lack of consideration on your partner's part. It might be that I feel a connection with these lyrics, I feel touched because I can totally relate to your story : (
I really like it its great. You should find a way to get it published.