What do you think of what I wrote?!
Question: lyrical street poetry of truth
for mature audiences with minds
Answers: lyrical street poetry of truth
for mature audiences with minds
i can dig it
sorry. you used 'dog' three times in like six lines. i couldn't go on
i think u might say dog too much in the beggining.
but its really good.
i mean i cant do ne thing near that.
I don't dig the lyrics, but for rap that is out there today it will stand. I guess then it would be alright.
after about the third line I couldn't go on...it sounded like 50 cent and Snoop Dogg got together and made a song which, by my standards, sucks. no offense, i'm just not into rap and calling everyone a "dog"
pretty good just try not to use dog as much cuz
no offense DOG bt it could have been better