Rate my song 1-10 10 being best?!
Question: Lonly deprest we have nobody else just a little boy and me..can someone just help us or just give us a dime or three
why oh why did she have to leave my little boy and me???? All we have is a blanket liveing on the streats on a cradboard box .
As the rain falls down from his cheaks i wipe it away as I hear him say why'd she have to leave .... i just looked at him and said i dont know as the big white flakes fall from the sky ..this time it was me who started to cry knowing all we have is a tank and some tornup jeans i know we will freeze.
(thats all i have sofar)
* 1 week ago
this is a country song so sing it like a country song
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1 week ago
this is not a true story i just saw a litlle boy and his dad crying on the streets because they were freezing my mom and i gave them money
Answers: Lonly deprest we have nobody else just a little boy and me..can someone just help us or just give us a dime or three
why oh why did she have to leave my little boy and me???? All we have is a blanket liveing on the streats on a cradboard box .
As the rain falls down from his cheaks i wipe it away as I hear him say why'd she have to leave .... i just looked at him and said i dont know as the big white flakes fall from the sky ..this time it was me who started to cry knowing all we have is a tank and some tornup jeans i know we will freeze.
(thats all i have sofar)
* 1 week ago
this is a country song so sing it like a country song
Additional Details
1 week ago
this is not a true story i just saw a litlle boy and his dad crying on the streets because they were freezing my mom and i gave them money
wow that really hits me right in the heart. It sounds so real, so sad, and would totally make a good country song. You might just want to add a chorus of some sort. All it needs now is instruments and BOOM! an instant hit.
If only i were a singing agent i would hire u! lol by the way i give you a 9! but of course thats just so far. Keep it up and i might give u a 10! :)
10
I need to hear it put the lyrics are like a 6
i like it i give it a 8
i like it a lot, try to finish it up you got it. PS you dont have to ryme ALL the time, but ya its looking real good. 9.5/10
it would of been better if you kept it more organized. i didn't even have patience to read that idiotic grammar you posted.
People don't flatter her...
Add an mp3 of your voice singing, who knows, it will probably sound better than it reads.
beautiful if its ever published and makes money maybe you should give it to charity
i think that if you sing it with just the right note of tune. i think it can be a very good song (:
wow dat song is amazin dont tell me u made dat :O:O
if u did den dammmm ur goood
u can make it :)
good luck :)
i luved da song personally :D
10 for me plzzzz :)
thats really good. id give it a 9.5 tho. You should continue writing songs.
so far,about an 8. When you get it finished it may be worth a 10!
i give it a 7...i thought it was good but maybe not such a confusing song...and not one that tells a story...maybe as an example: best of both worlds , by Miley Cyrus
add music
u shouldve givin the poor kid a jacket
seriously
how would you like to b freezing an nobody care?
i woudl give it a 7 but its very nice that u have a great heart....
pretty good.
i'd give it about 6~7
i think its a little too in your face.
Unless that is what you want, but I like it when songs
give a message. =]
keep working on it!!
awwwww thats so sad!!! :-'''[ love it! 11
wow, i think it a good song, i rate an 8.5