What do you think about these lyrics?!
Question: My friend is asking me my personal opinion on these, but I want to get a few others before i talk to her.
What we can’t hide, we ignore
You looked at me so much differently before
But now our time is up, and we’ve got nothing to show
So before you go, I want you to know
So long we’ve waited to feel alive
So many times our hearts have cried
For the one who would make life a better place
For the one that could hold us in our place
We love, we live
We laugh, we cry
But the feeling of being alive will never die
Never die, never forget
The one who made you, you.
Answers: My friend is asking me my personal opinion on these, but I want to get a few others before i talk to her.
What we can’t hide, we ignore
You looked at me so much differently before
But now our time is up, and we’ve got nothing to show
So before you go, I want you to know
So long we’ve waited to feel alive
So many times our hearts have cried
For the one who would make life a better place
For the one that could hold us in our place
We love, we live
We laugh, we cry
But the feeling of being alive will never die
Never die, never forget
The one who made you, you.
This is actually really good keep it up i write my own lyrics and poems so yea good lyrics!
These lyrics are fine. It's hard to say wether it will sound good when put to music without being able to hear the music.
it is good but make it longer