Is this a good rap?!
Question: if i die then no bother growing up with only a father no heart is wept more then mine the world is being destroyed one day at a time, im not a fake a person that shakes the earth quakes for answers but to me i have none the only road im going down is bar none the best the rest can die off slowly as i manifest the fear that i got can slowly rot i plot these dreams in my mind minding my own business living life one day at a time this is my hearts rhyme
Answers: if i die then no bother growing up with only a father no heart is wept more then mine the world is being destroyed one day at a time, im not a fake a person that shakes the earth quakes for answers but to me i have none the only road im going down is bar none the best the rest can die off slowly as i manifest the fear that i got can slowly rot i plot these dreams in my mind minding my own business living life one day at a time this is my hearts rhyme
Good freestyle should see where you can sing and sing it there.I would buy your CD.
Nice poetics...i made up dat word.... yeah it has nice poetic value
That's tight yo! I wrote these line as well:
Soulja Boy Off In This Hoe
Watch Me Crank It
Watch Me Roll
Watch Me Crank Dat Soulja Boy
Then Super Man Dat Hoe
Now Watch Me Do
(Crank Dat Soulja Boy)
Now Watch Me you
(Crank Dat Soulja Boy)
Now Watch Me you
(Crank Dat Soulja Boy)
Now Watch Me you
(Crank Dat Soulja Boy)
Soulja Boy Off In This Hoe
Watch Me Lean And Watch Me Rock
Super Man Dat Hoe
now Watch Me Crank Dat Robocop
Super Fresh, Now Watch Me Jock
Jocking On Them Haterz mate
When I Do Dat Soulja Boy
I Lean To The Left And Crank Dat thing
(Now You)
I'm Jocking On Yo xxxxx ***
And If We Get The Fightin
Then I'm Cocking On Your *****
You Catch Me At Yo Local Party
Yes I Crank It Everyday
Haterz Get Mad Cuz
"I Got Me Some bapes today"
I think It could be a hit,
Yes you really have potential keep up the good work :)
to be honest, you can make a lill' record for that.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwFbqsEOo...
its okay
i cant tell where one line ends and the other starts