Is this a good freestyle rap I wrote?!
Question: What what, it was only fair to warn that I was born with a set of horns, and metaphors attached to my dam abilical cords, war lord of rap that will bash you with a tw by four board that will smash into your Honda accord with a four door ford, but I'm more toward droppin' an acupellar to chop a fella to mozzarala worse than a helicopter propeller, got you locked in a celler, with your skeleton showin', developing anorexia cause I'm standin' next to ya eatin' a full force meal watching you starve to death with an iv in your vain, feeding you liquid darvaset, filling you full of drugs, pull the plugs on gun shot victims full of slugs, so they were picked up in an ambulance and driven with the acid drppin' out of there pants and given a less than 20 percent chance of livin', have a possible placement of a hospital patient, storing the dead bodies in grandma's little basement, driving a rusty scalple into your scalp and pulling your Adams apple out through your mouth, what what
Answers: What what, it was only fair to warn that I was born with a set of horns, and metaphors attached to my dam abilical cords, war lord of rap that will bash you with a tw by four board that will smash into your Honda accord with a four door ford, but I'm more toward droppin' an acupellar to chop a fella to mozzarala worse than a helicopter propeller, got you locked in a celler, with your skeleton showin', developing anorexia cause I'm standin' next to ya eatin' a full force meal watching you starve to death with an iv in your vain, feeding you liquid darvaset, filling you full of drugs, pull the plugs on gun shot victims full of slugs, so they were picked up in an ambulance and driven with the acid drppin' out of there pants and given a less than 20 percent chance of livin', have a possible placement of a hospital patient, storing the dead bodies in grandma's little basement, driving a rusty scalple into your scalp and pulling your Adams apple out through your mouth, what what
yea. show it to some record dudee. u will get something out of it
its good but i think youre too inspired by parts of other songs. "attached to my dam abilical cords" is too smiliar to eminem. the "what what" isnt necessary. the mozzerela part is not good (no offense) but i think you can rhyme good but just need to be more unique
you are kinda being like emminem and`` what what`` doesn`t go right you need to be yourself. But other wise it`s really good:)
Yeah, thats great, but its not a free style if you write it, lol.