Ok...so here are my revised lyrics please rate...?!
Question: I’m drowning in an ocean
Of dreadful fears and emotions
I reach for something to hold onto
I look up and I see you
I saw you in a vision
Eyes as bright as the sun
It wasn’t an apparition
You were the real one
(Chorus)
Take it and leave
My heart its for free
I can’t believe you’re gone
Without you, I’m done
I forgive you please come back…please come back
I walk the streets alone
I see happiness in throngs
Its hard to tell
If I’m really doing well
Handling the pain
Thought you’d do the same
All I can think about is you
How could it be true
Answers: I’m drowning in an ocean
Of dreadful fears and emotions
I reach for something to hold onto
I look up and I see you
I saw you in a vision
Eyes as bright as the sun
It wasn’t an apparition
You were the real one
(Chorus)
Take it and leave
My heart its for free
I can’t believe you’re gone
Without you, I’m done
I forgive you please come back…please come back
I walk the streets alone
I see happiness in throngs
Its hard to tell
If I’m really doing well
Handling the pain
Thought you’d do the same
All I can think about is you
How could it be true
Wow you are a great song writer this is amazing. i wish I could do that!
dude it's awesome
awwww
your missin someone
and it is good
"There is beauty in despair" - Davey Havok (...But Home Is Nowhere/Spoken Word)