Please comment on my lyrics?!
Question: Please comment on my lyrics!?
Stood at your heart i see a crossroad one says stay here and the other says depart
but still i remain although our feelings may of changed im still the same
Your tears they hide the truth, i never once doubted you!.
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Ooohh you hold X4
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I feel your heart break in two when im half way on the otherside you and i feel your mind break to find when other peoples dreams are coming true,
you said your waiting for the answer that are weaved inside my mind but you should know and understand the answers are inside you!.!.!.!.!. to find!.
Are your eyes dark enough to filter out the things you see and shade in love
Do you ears break my words and confuse them with your confused tongue with the things you thought you heard,
so please tell me when you decide to see me again!.
ooooh you hold the key x4
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but still i remain although our feelings may of changed im still the same
Your tears they hide the truth, i never once doubted you!.
Pre Chorus
Ooohh you hold X4
Chorus
I feel your heart break in two when im half way on the otherside you and i feel your mind break to find when other peoples dreams are coming true,
you said your waiting for the answer that are weaved inside my mind but you should know and understand the answers are inside you!.!.!.!.!. to find!.
Are your eyes dark enough to filter out the things you see and shade in love
Do you ears break my words and confuse them with your confused tongue with the things you thought you heard,
so please tell me when you decide to see me again!.
ooooh you hold the key x4
Chorus x2Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
lovely heartfelt words that get to your soul, really good
I love words and every song should have a story, they are the best ones, you old romantic, well doneWww@Enter-QA@Com
I love words and every song should have a story, they are the best ones, you old romantic, well doneWww@Enter-QA@Com
Come on man!! For "what do you think of my lyrics" read, " I think i'm great"
Have you any plans to actually release these "songs" o yours!?
Put your songs out there and you'll see what folk think o your songs/lyrics!.
For the record, i think its clumsy,conceited and a very poor attempt!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Have you any plans to actually release these "songs" o yours!?
Put your songs out there and you'll see what folk think o your songs/lyrics!.
For the record, i think its clumsy,conceited and a very poor attempt!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think It's Very Good You May qualify for a song writer you will see someday you will shine brighter than a star and you are one! you know keep writing songs you'll be shock someday someone famous recognizes your talentWww@Enter-QA@Com
Those lyrics are really good, so sweet too!.!.!.!.I think you would make a really great song writer!.!.!. very good!.!.!.Good Luck : )Www@Enter-QA@Com
They are some of the cutest lyrics i have ever seen!
Kinda describe my life aswell!
Good work!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Kinda describe my life aswell!
Good work!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think they're very good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think I'm going to vomit!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Do you really want to know!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
nice! :)Www@Enter-QA@Com