Tell how my written rap sounds?!
Question: Tell how my written rap sounds!?
Agian i'm bored and love writing rap lyrics!
I wrote these lyrics 2 no beat, and want you 2 rate these little verses!
1-5
A threat 2 civilians community
Ambitiously eqquiped with ammunition artllery
Anxiously but im producing visciously
if it's beef i'll tear tissue off of body limbs like chemosurgery
I rise from new york's cracked pavements 2 vanquish
by statement on how i feel on hip hop underground enslavement
With no resistance i'm spitting everything out of existence
fighting wars like battle ships with no assistance cuz my 1 army is different
K it was random, but i have nothin 2 do rate em 1-5Www@Enter-QA@Com
I wrote these lyrics 2 no beat, and want you 2 rate these little verses!
1-5
A threat 2 civilians community
Ambitiously eqquiped with ammunition artllery
Anxiously but im producing visciously
if it's beef i'll tear tissue off of body limbs like chemosurgery
I rise from new york's cracked pavements 2 vanquish
by statement on how i feel on hip hop underground enslavement
With no resistance i'm spitting everything out of existence
fighting wars like battle ships with no assistance cuz my 1 army is different
K it was random, but i have nothin 2 do rate em 1-5Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
It's alright, 3/5!. Make it longer next time!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
not to be **** but i am better do u have a myspace so we can battle look at my stuff but i will give u a 5 read all mine
give no **** shootin black like a hockey puck u a cocky **** i know wats up u wanna be me but first u otta beat or defeat me i shootr as yo lining receitin tha animal u feedin i shoot till u stop breathin im see tha evening as it goes by yall know im dat guy shoot bullets threw yo eye n hell u gon fry i dont otta lie but ***** dont reply!.!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
give no **** shootin black like a hockey puck u a cocky **** i know wats up u wanna be me but first u otta beat or defeat me i shootr as yo lining receitin tha animal u feedin i shoot till u stop breathin im see tha evening as it goes by yall know im dat guy shoot bullets threw yo eye n hell u gon fry i dont otta lie but ***** dont reply!.!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
that's f*ckin wicked, dude!. i love the reference 2 underground sh*t, it's ****** a!. if u love underground artists, i hope u've checked out the phsycopathic records artists!. u would probably like techn9ne!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
~Don't understand half the words
~Don't get what it's about, other than that you're some kind of badass that is supposed to be intimidating
~Chemosurgery!?
~Rap is terribleWww@Enter-QA@Com
~Don't get what it's about, other than that you're some kind of badass that is supposed to be intimidating
~Chemosurgery!?
~Rap is terribleWww@Enter-QA@Com
We ain't graduate from school n****
Them big words ain't cool n****
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OK, seriously, lyrics mean way more to me than the beat but I it would be hard to flow these lyrics with a beat!.
I give it 4/5Www@Enter-QA@Com
Them big words ain't cool n****
-Dumb It Down
OK, seriously, lyrics mean way more to me than the beat but I it would be hard to flow these lyrics with a beat!.
I give it 4/5Www@Enter-QA@Com
i think it was good!. i would say a 4!.5 listen to my boyfriend!.!. =]
what would you rate him!?
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sounds like you wannabe immortal technique by using big wordsWww@Enter-QA@Com
I see you dropped out of school in 7th grade!.
Time to go back to the drawing board of reading a book and i don't mean dr!. Seuss either!.!.
Peace!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Time to go back to the drawing board of reading a book and i don't mean dr!. Seuss either!.!.
Peace!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
you get a 0!.
quit posin!. your not a thug soldier fighting a battle!. especially not on yahoo!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
quit posin!. your not a thug soldier fighting a battle!. especially not on yahoo!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
4Www@Enter-QA@Com
LOL @ OmegaWww@Enter-QA@Com
5Www@Enter-QA@Com
3/5Www@Enter-QA@Com
4Www@Enter-QA@Com
Its
OhkayWww@Enter-QA@Com
OhkayWww@Enter-QA@Com
That's hot!. I would say a 4!. U can throw in a lil more metaphors!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
poorWww@Enter-QA@Com
It was kind of weird!.Www@Enter-QA@Com