I'm writing song lyrics and I'm stuck?!
Question: I'm writing song lyrics and I'm stuck!?
this is what i have so far!.!.!.
I wish that you could just see
just what its like to be me!.
Hiding myself behind this mask of shame
knowing I’m the only one to blame
I wish you would just know
Just what its like to be in this show
Playing myself like I would want to be
Knowing that this is what I want them to see
I sit here hitting the ground
wishing someone hears my true sound
maybe some day you will understand when youve freed me
from what I have always pretended to be
!.!.!.!.!.!.
this is how i want to end it!.!.!.
Perhaps you will someday come along
Singing and dancing with this song
Together we can lift our masks and see!.
Who we truly are and who we can be
can someone give me suggestions in wat else to put in, or is there anythingg i shouldd take outt
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Answers:
Together we can lift our masks and see!.
Who we truly are and who we can be
& then then we figure out
what this confusion is all about
you'll finally see
that this is me
!?!?!?
Www@Enter-QA@Com
Who we truly are and who we can be
& then then we figure out
what this confusion is all about
you'll finally see
that this is me
!?!?!?
Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think you just need to work on a chorus to add between those lines!.!. like maybe about what kind of mask your wearing!.!.
!? just a suggestion but something like this kinda thing in your own description if mine doesn't fit!?
glittered finish, tearless eyes
painted outline of a perfect smile
never reflecting a broken heart
but I'm on the verge of falling apart
btw!.!. love your lyrics and good luckWww@Enter-QA@Com
!? just a suggestion but something like this kinda thing in your own description if mine doesn't fit!?
glittered finish, tearless eyes
painted outline of a perfect smile
never reflecting a broken heart
but I'm on the verge of falling apart
btw!.!. love your lyrics and good luckWww@Enter-QA@Com
finally and forever more
past endeavors i shall adore
come with me upon this ride
together we'll await the coming tide!.
see if that works for what your trying to say!.
i wouldn't take anything out, its very good, i kinda like it!.
keep practicing and im sure coming up with more lyrics will only get easier!. good luck!Www@Enter-QA@Com
past endeavors i shall adore
come with me upon this ride
together we'll await the coming tide!.
see if that works for what your trying to say!.
i wouldn't take anything out, its very good, i kinda like it!.
keep practicing and im sure coming up with more lyrics will only get easier!. good luck!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I love you <3, great lyrics, I like it as is :PWww@Enter-QA@Com
omg you dont suck!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com