What do you rate?!


Question:

What do you rate?


1 out of 10

ever since the death of hip hop
all u rappers stopped
all u rappers froze
as i rose
to the number one spot
the new breath of hip hop
hear this and drop
i made your heart beat stop
cause i knew i was back to back with rap
and i aint goin back
i hate that life
money issues,bullying,fights if only i had that knife
kids treated me unfair
so bad that i aint even care
kanye sold more than 1 million copies he's a millionaire
step in my shoes for a day
walk through LA
u'll realize what hip hop has become today
songs like ay bay bay
make no sense today
i liked this girl
she never liked me back
what she meant to me was what i meant for rap
all i want is love fuc^ the money stacks
hip hop is a form of art
especially when it comes from your heart
and what u say is a reflection
this song is my invention
i know i cant rap
but i still dont sit back
im not on crack and i dont think im all that
but i believe one of these days its comin back

Additional Details

8 hours ago
1 IS THE WORST

10 IS THE BEST.

8 hours ago
yea..i wrote it i dont know if i should finish it.im gonna use the lyrics for this song.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pg8hgyhqo...

8 hours ago
yea..i wrote it i dont know if i should finish it.im gonna use the instrumental for this song.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pg8hgyhqo...


Answers: 8 hours ago
1 IS THE WORST

10 IS THE BEST.8 hours ago
yea..i wrote it i dont know if i should finish it.im gonna use the lyrics for this song.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pg8hgyhqo...8 hours ago
yea..i wrote it i dont know if i should finish it.im gonna use the instrumental for this song.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pg8hgyhqo... 3. you ramble on about 30 subjects in the verse that have no relation to eachother. it's almost as if you didn't have anything to rhyme with so you picked anything. pick a topic and stick to it throughout the verse. Source(s):
hip hop producer 8 - 8.5 Cheers! Definitely a 10 idk my bff jill 9 out of 10!!! XD 7.5 um i cant tell unless you were to rap it cus divelry is part of how good you are but from the rap alone id say a 9 or 10
btw i wouldnt put a rap that good online ppl might steal it or whatever Hmm, who sings that? I give those lyrics a 9. I think it is okay so I give it an 8. Nine. Some of the parts were outta place, but other than that it rocks! truth be told-- a 7. If you wrote it yourself then that's hella good.

Btw, next time don't post something you've made yourself cause it may be plagerized. definetely 10! i think that anything original and transfered from within is a gift.

by the way madeline_ hurley its idk my bff rose. 9 but u got break it down 2 verses
and you just saved my music homework on rap



lol
just kidding 10 i loved it


but like i was confused cuz it's like "hip-hop is a form of art"
but then it's like "songs like ay bay bay make no sense today", so yeah it's like you switched from rap to hip-hop in the middle then you go back to rap, idk it was confusing to me
like you switched topics

BUT YEAH
you should copyright it so know one steals it

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