Thank you for your comments on my last one, is this one any good? Written again !


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Thank you for your comments on my last one, is this one any good? Written again by me!?


Your eyes tell me you'll always be there,
The touch of your hand lets me know that you care,
The sound of your voice sets a dance in my heart,
But the reality is we're forever apart,
If only I told you the way that it was,
I would not have the sense of regret and of loss,
Because baby you'll always be locked in my soul,
The face of an angel and the heart of gold.

ok this one took me a bit longer,
10mins. x thanks for your time!

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8 hours ago
No its not a song! I wrote it myself! If you want try and find it in a song! You won't find it!


Answers: 8 hours ago
No its not a song! I wrote it myself! If you want try and find it in a song! You won't find it! sounds a bit like a song i've heard a long time ago, i do like the last line though. sounds like it could be a song Beautiful. Yes, It's good.I like it

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