Why can some people be so mean and......?!
Question: Okay...
I wrote this Love Poem for a special someone and that someone called me and said my poetry sux and that I need to take some sort of medication like colored pills or whatever....
Anyway..here's the poem. What do YOU think?
I LOVE YOU
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Okay.... when I saw you I knew
Knew as in totally know
Know that it's you I love
Love thicker than veal
Veal, I eat after oatmeal
Oatmeal, I Love You too... for real.
Burp....
Answers: Okay...
I wrote this Love Poem for a special someone and that someone called me and said my poetry sux and that I need to take some sort of medication like colored pills or whatever....
Anyway..here's the poem. What do YOU think?
I LOVE YOU
==========
Okay.... when I saw you I knew
Knew as in totally know
Know that it's you I love
Love thicker than veal
Veal, I eat after oatmeal
Oatmeal, I Love You too... for real.
Burp....
haha I like oatmeal and i enjoyed you poem. People are just jealous of your talents.
poem couldve been better if u mentioned cookies and cheese
nice one... made me laugh
i would have been fallen in love instantly if it was for me :))
that was gr8 its just it didnt have a cool thing in it
Well she should learn that being thoughtful counts.
And that's a lovely poem.
i want to publish that
Haha, nice. Her knees didn't get weak after that? For shame young dame.
Maybe you shouldn't send random poetry to the person that you are stalking. Try staying within the confines of the restraining order.
They were probably offended because veal really isn't all that thick. Switch it out with cast iron steel and try it again.
ummmm What can I say??
well u start out well only to butch up in the ending portion but hey some people have an alergy for poem so its better u confront and tell them then use the rhtyming lines for them coz they are always pissed on poetry breed of human just maybe!
that was cute! =]