A poem for my girlfriend?!


Question: I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again.

I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.

Answers: I had closed the door upon my heart
And wouldn't let anyone in,
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
But, that would never happen again.

I had locked the door and tossed the key
As hard, and as far as I could,
Love would never enter there again,
My heart was closed for good.

Then you came into my life
And made me change my mind,
Just when I thought that tiny key
was impossible to find.

That's when you held out your hand
And proved to me I was wrong,
Inside your palm was the key to my heart...
You had it all along.
omg! That is so amazing! I love it!! I love you so much Ryan!
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    • that was excellent! i wish i culd be as good a writer as you! then maybe i culd get an a in english! she will love it!
    You could very well be the next Dylan.
    Wow! That was beautiful!!! Your girlfriends so lucky! *faints*
    oh my god, that was amazing!

    perfect.
    r ya talking ut you asked you best you be best be preped?
    oh that is soo good. Do you have a new flame? I think she will adore this poem..
    Atta Boy!!
    Well...... I think poems are to mushy.. And that would freak me out if my boyfreind gave one to me.. So I guess im not like most girls.... Crap.. lol =)
    That was great!!!
    And the words even rymed!
    wow that is absolutely beautiful. Your girlfriend will love it and will feel that you really care for her. great job, your very talented. danngg ur good.
    WOW............she is a very lucky girl......that is the sweetest thing I've seen in a long time
    I wish I had a guy to write me something so sweet :)
    My heart aches for someone to love me like that..... you guys are very lucky.......good luck to you both for a long loving relationship :)
    Aww!
    That is so cute!
    that is a beautiful poem, you are truly gifted, and she is lucky to have someone like you that cares=)
    omg!
    that's sooooo sweet!
    i love it!
    & so will she. =)?
    you wrote that for me??
    O.M.G that was soo good..i loved it .. ur girlfriend is luck she has u!!!

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