Rate my poem please?(what do you expect at 430 am)?!


Question: I was born on a day that ended in "Y"

So its obvious I was destined to be a wonderful guy.

The stars up above determined my fate

So its not my fault that Im so great.

I know you want to meet me

so you can hold my hand.

I know you want to be me

Cause Im a wonderful man.

Its clear to the world

that Im the greatest

the best yes Im number 1.

I shine in this life much brighter than the sun.

I walk down the street and people scream out my name.

My glorious image is embeded in their brain.

When you go to sleep at night

Im always on your mind

cause Im smooth and Im handsome

And Im one of a kind.

So now I leave you with this thought

to rest inside your head.

You can hug your pillow close at night

and pretend Im in your bed.


Answers: I was born on a day that ended in "Y"

So its obvious I was destined to be a wonderful guy.

The stars up above determined my fate

So its not my fault that Im so great.

I know you want to meet me

so you can hold my hand.

I know you want to be me

Cause Im a wonderful man.

Its clear to the world

that Im the greatest

the best yes Im number 1.

I shine in this life much brighter than the sun.

I walk down the street and people scream out my name.

My glorious image is embeded in their brain.

When you go to sleep at night

Im always on your mind

cause Im smooth and Im handsome

And Im one of a kind.

So now I leave you with this thought

to rest inside your head.

You can hug your pillow close at night

and pretend Im in your bed.

wow! im going to have wet dreams when i sleep today!

where is your pic?

Best poem ever!

It is very nice. Not only because it rhymes, it also makes sense.

narcsist...... but good poem

I think it's a great poem! Good work! ?

haha, awesome i will never read dr seuss again, P:S where you been???

nice poem it's cute made me lough
i liked the bit where u said hug Ur pillow at night
heres a star have a wonder full day/night =]

hey at least it rhymes lol..

if u were one of my closest friends... i'd like it if u read it to us... that way we can all call u retar ded-- which should be a compliment in the circle when used this way.

lol. u got me cracking up. it's almost 3am where I live. lol. thanks bud.

you're like the friend we all love to throw pillows at and joke with lol.

lolll, nice

i bet you wrote whilst standing in front of a mirror


xD

Love yourself first before anyone can love you, right?
9 over 10...

thats such a wonderful poem!! awsome job pal....i liked the last sentence ha ha lol!! id rate it as 11 out of 10!!

haha,i love it >.<



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