You just KNOW when it's over, don't you?!


Question: Inside, there’s this
mountain that shines
sideways towards the sun and
the blackness that comes at night, comes
only when it’s sure that it is
night
helps itself to what’s
left of my soul
and I don’t have the strength
to devour it
or offer any resistance
and I say “Hey, man,
what the fucck?” but it
keeps coming, the
Night
keeps rolling, the motherfuccker has
a million wheels and it’s hell-bent
and there I am,
trying
trying
but I’m as good as gone
and the fire-red
sides of the mountain
start to give and
when the last of the light
blinks
its goodbye, I smile because
I know I never really
had a chance.


Answers: Inside, there’s this
mountain that shines
sideways towards the sun and
the blackness that comes at night, comes
only when it’s sure that it is
night
helps itself to what’s
left of my soul
and I don’t have the strength
to devour it
or offer any resistance
and I say “Hey, man,
what the fucck?” but it
keeps coming, the
Night
keeps rolling, the motherfuccker has
a million wheels and it’s hell-bent
and there I am,
trying
trying
but I’m as good as gone
and the fire-red
sides of the mountain
start to give and
when the last of the light
blinks
its goodbye, I smile because
I know I never really
had a chance.

Tides clash
with the rocks
of the Shore
a Continuum
undisturbed
for as long
as Time could remember
like Men and
The Sands of Time
witnessed by the
Endless Moonlight
there are those
who are immortals
and there are those
who get washed away

Chance like the
ever changing Winds
will never be tamed...

Nice poem.


And to answer your question, unfortunately I don't.

u know meter really helps in poetry, u dont even need a rhyme scheme or anything.

i was just suggesting. i liked ur poem. wasnt trying to be a dick. i just reread wat i wrote and it sounda kinda harsh...

wow, sum1 just gave every1 all thumbs up. such a beautiful gesture. almost makes me wanna cry. but no.

>.< i did it again. like simon from american idol (i never watched the show).

I really love your poetry.
And I really wanted to answer your snowman question.

Thanks for the laugh BUK

Nice poem, I really like it

*applauding loudly* YAY BUK!!
In answer to your question: I don't even wait for the fat lady to sing!!

way to go Buk,nice.

Your literary talents..........*sigh*

You are a poet. @8-)

Life keeps on rollin, rollin, rollin, Rawhide!

good night to you, too.

It's a nice poem, but it sounds like you are sad

Have you lost your TV remote again?



Nice Poem :)

I am impressed....
Oh yeah...
and
Peace.

Pretty good way with words. You might want to check out the poetry section here. One contact of mine is very talented as well. TD Euwaitte He posts in poetry all the time and he has a similar sense of humor like you or I do.

Yes, Buck, you do... don't you?

Yes, but the opposite is equally true.

kind of somber though,don't cha' think?
meks is pretty cool too.

Yes but it's not over yet.

You always have a way with words Buk...

...but the fat lady ain't singing yet.

We all luv ya.

iluv U.



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