WhaT do you think of my Poem?! ("THE BLACK MAN")?!


Question: A cheater, a robber, a liar,
he reeks with a stench e'er foul
Oft' identified by gunfire,
The Black Man stays out on the prowl.

Surrounded by filth and grime,
still never quite cunning as a cat,
The Black Man, the backbone of e'ery crime,
resides among the roach and the rat.

Less intelligent an not near' as useful
as the common zebra breed,
He steals from all that is fruitful,
so his illegit' spawn he may feed.

He snorts coke and shoots the needle,
abusing his body so black
From e'ery truth, The Black Man will weedle -
- away, and just keep snorting crack.

A nuisance to the common man;
an eyesore to the white,
The Black Man has, with great speed ran*
away from e'ery fight.

The Black Man is rather ill-informed
in all that he does say
'Tis but a shame it's not reformed
(regarding the KKK.)

With the utmost of sorrows I close this poem,
(for how much more I do have to say!)
Komrades beware, for the black man shall roam
Until the dawning of *our* day!


Answers: A cheater, a robber, a liar,
he reeks with a stench e'er foul
Oft' identified by gunfire,
The Black Man stays out on the prowl.

Surrounded by filth and grime,
still never quite cunning as a cat,
The Black Man, the backbone of e'ery crime,
resides among the roach and the rat.

Less intelligent an not near' as useful
as the common zebra breed,
He steals from all that is fruitful,
so his illegit' spawn he may feed.

He snorts coke and shoots the needle,
abusing his body so black
From e'ery truth, The Black Man will weedle -
- away, and just keep snorting crack.

A nuisance to the common man;
an eyesore to the white,
The Black Man has, with great speed ran*
away from e'ery fight.

The Black Man is rather ill-informed
in all that he does say
'Tis but a shame it's not reformed
(regarding the KKK.)

With the utmost of sorrows I close this poem,
(for how much more I do have to say!)
Komrades beware, for the black man shall roam
Until the dawning of *our* day!

All I can say about this is: Whut, now?!

Gimme best answer, b!tch. You know you want to.

I'm a Black Martian. The poem was too stereotypical. You wouldn't want me to write a poem about your origins, so why do it to me and everyone else?

It's people like you who destroy the world and publicise evil on the news.

Good Luck~
I hope you change for better

I do not stink and I do not take drugs. The rest is pretty much on point.

EDIT: Whoever gave me a thumbs down can give me a drug test and a pit test right now and I'll pass them both!

It's downright offensive.

First of all this is so wrong on so way level. Second its full of stereotypes its not even funny. And last your poem should be called Humans because all of that has nothing to do with race because it happens in every race.

You have too much time on your hands, computer nerd.

I think you are an idiot. I would like you to recite your ignorant poem to a black man and let me know how that turns out. Get a life you coward!

I like it! Very insightful.

Why must you single out "the black man?" --
I'd personally like to see other groups targeted in the future -- equal opportunity racism!

Prejudice of any kind is often based on ignorance and fear of anything unfamiliar.

If you put as much energy into developing your mind as you have into your poem, you could probably be a benefit to Humankind.

I am not even offended by your poem, I feel sad that you are so removed from the truth it's unreal.

i word, RACIST=YOU, WAIT THATS LIKE 8

Not true. Not nice. You need help.



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