Please rate my poem?!
Question: The Old Man (by Bill, copyright 2008, all rights reserved)
The old man whispered to me
In an alcoholic wheeze
"Keep your eye upon the nacho, Bill
And not upon the cheese."
Answers: The Old Man (by Bill, copyright 2008, all rights reserved)
The old man whispered to me
In an alcoholic wheeze
"Keep your eye upon the nacho, Bill
And not upon the cheese."
Not bad. How about this one.
Star light,star bright.
I am bald and pasty white
I only tan by the moon at night
I am "The Moon tan man"
I give you an 8,and thanks to all that give me a thumbs down!
3
Hot.
It made me laugh!
pretty good.
Um, ok...???? Cool. um ... a 500!
6/10
it rhymes at least
Great!
i would rate it a 0
LOVED IT, There should be more poems like this!
haha i love it!
and i LOVE nachos!
Very bad.
Wow. I'm speechless. 10.
An A-#1 Bill Original.