What do u think of these lyrics?!
Question: This happens over and over again,
I cant seem to stop it from happeing,
I let them right into my heart,
And the give me an ouce of theres,
My hopes reach righgh up into the sky,
but like all things they eventually die,
I come crashing down again,
Just waiting for it to begin
It happens over and over again,
I cant seem to stop it from happeing,
I let you right into my heart,
and you give me a fraction of yours,
My hopes sore up and touch the sky,
But like all things they eventually die,
I just want to be there by your side,
Me be yours, and you be mine
I dont want an ounce of hope,
Cuz I know like al lthinks in this world,
They will eventually die,
We'll evenually die.
Answers: This happens over and over again,
I cant seem to stop it from happeing,
I let them right into my heart,
And the give me an ouce of theres,
My hopes reach righgh up into the sky,
but like all things they eventually die,
I come crashing down again,
Just waiting for it to begin
It happens over and over again,
I cant seem to stop it from happeing,
I let you right into my heart,
and you give me a fraction of yours,
My hopes sore up and touch the sky,
But like all things they eventually die,
I just want to be there by your side,
Me be yours, and you be mine
I dont want an ounce of hope,
Cuz I know like al lthinks in this world,
They will eventually die,
We'll evenually die.
AWSOME TRUE
i like them alot....they seem semi deep...
Too sappy. No offense.
trying too hard
Eh there ok....i think the "theme/what ur song is trying to say"
is good buit i think u need to work on it & change alor of the words & giv eit a better course. Your song isint complete either u need verse course etc.
There are some sights that can help you with song writing u should check them out...just google it.
It is Sad but very touching. It sounds like something I have heard before. I love it good job