Rate my lyrics?!
Question: "i won't bite you unless you bite me i see you hiding in the darkness your eyes glowing from the street lights, your breath cold as ice i promise i will play nice"
its part of my new song called - darkness cries
so what do you think??
Answers: "i won't bite you unless you bite me i see you hiding in the darkness your eyes glowing from the street lights, your breath cold as ice i promise i will play nice"
its part of my new song called - darkness cries
so what do you think??
Wow. I love it. You picked your words beautifully!
git dat garbage outta here
very good...very descriptive
it's okay, but to be honest, it's a bit.. scary.
you know, stalker-like.
no offense, though :)
firstly glowing things emit their own light. you may have meant reflecting the street light, other than that i like bad girl games.
anyone that says different has a brown tounge
awesome you could spice it up and make it a little punk rock theme
hard to say.... a strong vocal melody can take ok lyrics and make them great. its all about presentation. in my opinion, words like darkness can be cliche. and should be avoided. but ive written many songs and i hate them all, so, what do i know....