Is this an okay peom??!
Question: Is this an okay peom!?!?
for my creative writing class, my teacher wants us to write anything (a poem, story, song, etc!.!.!.) that sort of reflects this generation!.
so here's the end of the poem that I wrote, well, it's sort of like a poem:
Do we still use the art
Of communication!?
Guess not
Welcome to our generation!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
so here's the end of the poem that I wrote, well, it's sort of like a poem:
Do we still use the art
Of communication!?
Guess not
Welcome to our generation!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
That's cool!.!.!.you are communicating now are'nt you!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
ye that sounds really good! the ending makes the beginning sound really really good too! =]
it all pretty much makes sense to me!.!.!. [i have a friend at skool who loves poetry, she's made a sort of book!.!.!. some of her poems dont really make sense to me but i guess they do to her! =] !.!.!.]
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it all pretty much makes sense to me!.!.!. [i have a friend at skool who loves poetry, she's made a sort of book!.!.!. some of her poems dont really make sense to me but i guess they do to her! =] !.!.!.]
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Are you kidding mean it's better than okay!.!.i mean it's amazing im not trying to be sarcastic!.!.!.i mena i love things taht are like this!.!.!.i really wanna know the rest of the poem!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.I bet ur gonna get a good mark(grade) on that!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
!.!.!.!.I bet ur gonna get a good mark(grade) on that!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yeaaah!Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's okay!.!.!.but you should shoot for more than okay!. Can you post the rest of the poem!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's good!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Its really good! I like it because its like telling what really goes on!Www@Enter-QA@Com
So Cool!!!!!!:) ;;))Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yes it is!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
its ok but a bit shortWww@Enter-QA@Com
great!Www@Enter-QA@Com
sounds coolWww@Enter-QA@Com
short and straight to the point i liked itWww@Enter-QA@Com