Another poem? rate plz!!!?!
Question: Another poem!? rate plz!!!!?
i need to open
my eyes
to see
everything
place i
once knew is
gone
just a memory
no one can c me
i'm just a shadow
i'm a nobody
walkin the streets
getting older
more unreckizable
looking at a picture
just a memory
touchin their faces
touchin their hearts
talkin to them
they cant hear me
just a ghost
in the shadows
whispering to friends i once
known
invisible
free verse poem i wrote!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
my eyes
to see
everything
place i
once knew is
gone
just a memory
no one can c me
i'm just a shadow
i'm a nobody
walkin the streets
getting older
more unreckizable
looking at a picture
just a memory
touchin their faces
touchin their hearts
talkin to them
they cant hear me
just a ghost
in the shadows
whispering to friends i once
known
invisible
free verse poem i wrote!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
WOW!. That totally rocked!
you should publish thatWww@Enter-QA@Com
you should publish thatWww@Enter-QA@Com
CUTE CUTE CUTE
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Seriously, try it with a beat and sing it -- it sounds like a song!.
BEST WISHES!Www@Enter-QA@Com
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Seriously, try it with a beat and sing it -- it sounds like a song!.
BEST WISHES!Www@Enter-QA@Com
LOVE IT, BECKY!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Cool!!!!!!!! You are a very good poet!Www@Enter-QA@Com
nice peom becky i miss u here in FL cause its so borin!!!! i hav to talk to u bout JOSH!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
That's pretty cool!.
u're great poem writer!.
have a star!Www@Enter-QA@Com
u're great poem writer!.
have a star!Www@Enter-QA@Com