How do u like this poem written by me???? PLZ JUST READ & RATE..thats all...need!
Question: How do u like this poem written by me!?!?!?!? PLZ JUST READ & RATE!.!.thats all!.!.!.need some kinda feedbck, thnk!!?
Life is an open prison,
full of pleasurable horrors,
my heart is incandescent,
and so shall it be tomorrow!.
My life is full of sorrow,
that seems so hard to mask,
I feel myself thrown into a furrow,
and getting out is a difficult task!.
Each day i'm put to the test,
and I feel the pressure sore,
I hope to be at my best,
but people expect allot more!.
Despite my constant dislike,
Life has a charm that allures,
it kindaa gives my life a hike,
and so life goes on & I follow!.!.
Thanks for reading
Rate this peom on a scale of 1-10, comments will be appreciated!!!
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full of pleasurable horrors,
my heart is incandescent,
and so shall it be tomorrow!.
My life is full of sorrow,
that seems so hard to mask,
I feel myself thrown into a furrow,
and getting out is a difficult task!.
Each day i'm put to the test,
and I feel the pressure sore,
I hope to be at my best,
but people expect allot more!.
Despite my constant dislike,
Life has a charm that allures,
it kindaa gives my life a hike,
and so life goes on & I follow!.!.
Thanks for reading
Rate this peom on a scale of 1-10, comments will be appreciated!!!
thanks to allWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
OMD i love it- its so true to!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.erm im saying 9/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'm bad with 1-10 scales but!.!.!.
I know this ones for sure :)
10/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
I know this ones for sure :)
10/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
Echoes the following lines Lord Tennyson:
" I fall upon the thorns of life;
I bleed!."
Nice!. Keep it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
" I fall upon the thorns of life;
I bleed!."
Nice!. Keep it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
10 out of 10!.
if only i could have such a talent i would be so happy >w<
Only thing is: your typos!. but i bet they were accidents!Www@Enter-QA@Com
if only i could have such a talent i would be so happy >w<
Only thing is: your typos!. but i bet they were accidents!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think it's a great poem!. I feel like I can relate!. I'll give it a 10!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
wooooo!.!.!.!. 100!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
HOW ABOUT !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. 0!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Is that your life!? Nice poem though, well writen I would go for max!. marks!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's FAR too depressing dear!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
4!. its ok, but it sounds like you are 'trying' to be sad!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
ermmm!.!.8/10!.
I liked it, but it did kinda bum me out a bit!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I liked it, but it did kinda bum me out a bit!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i give 5/10
some of the poem is true but some of it is not!.
not everyday you feel pressure right!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
some of the poem is true but some of it is not!.
not everyday you feel pressure right!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
wow!.!.!.!.!.!.!.so its your view on life!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
its great!.!.!.!.!.!.i say 9/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
its great!.!.!.!.!.!.i say 9/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
cant say cause din't understandWww@Enter-QA@Com