Please rate this song out of ten.?!


Question: Please rate this song out of ten!.!?
Come And Gone Away
Versus One
I can’t believe you came and gone away so fast, I guess it was time for you to go!. Why did cancer have to get the best of you!? Honey please don’t go!. I’ll miss you to bad!.

Chorus
Please come back baby, I need you, I love you, I crave the love you gave me every night of the week, it felt so good!. So good to be with you!.

Versus Two
Tonight you’re death just hit me hard, I didn’t really realize it until just now!. Tonight I’m going to miss your loving that you gave me!. It meant so much to me!.

Chorus
Please come back baby, I need you, I love you, I crave the love you gave me every night of the week, it felt so good!. So good to be with you!.


Versus Three
It’s just hard to believe you left me, after all the years we cherished!. I’ve enjoyed every moment I had with you and no one can ever take that away from me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
9/10

Didnt know what kind of tone to read it in thoughWww@Enter-QA@Com

I think you should remove the words cancer and death!. Even though that's what you wrote the song about, if you change those words more people will relate to the song and it can mean a loss but not specifically a death!.!.and it will still mean the same thing to you!. But unless you plan on becoming a recording artist I think it doesn't matter and you can leave it how it is!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

don't actually mention the words 'cancer' and 'death' - try come up with some metaphors: it'll be much more beautiful and will flow better than *sing, sing, sing, CANCER, sing, sing, sing, DEATH, sing, sing, sing!.!.!.* do ya know what i mean!?
like "!.!.!. you came and gone away so fast, I guess it was time for you to go!. Why did that monster have to get the best of you!? Honey please!.!.!." and "!.!.!. you're gone and it just hit me hard, I didn’t really realize!.!.!." get it!?Www@Enter-QA@Com

6/10

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