What do you think of my most recent poem?!
Question: What do you think of my most recent poem!?
"Transparent Tears":
Try to wipe away the tears
Attempt to raise your hand in vain
However once the drops are gone you'll feel the sears!.
The burning fires of emotion
Will have you plead!.
You'll suffer more then ever
Once your troubled soul begins to bleed
Even though the moisture is all gone
The unbearable agony will haunt you,
There would be no reason to run!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Try to wipe away the tears
Attempt to raise your hand in vain
However once the drops are gone you'll feel the sears!.
The burning fires of emotion
Will have you plead!.
You'll suffer more then ever
Once your troubled soul begins to bleed
Even though the moisture is all gone
The unbearable agony will haunt you,
There would be no reason to run!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
That is an absolutely beautiful poem!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I love everything about it, except the last line!Www@Enter-QA@Com