Can you read my poetry? i dont have a title so that would help too.!


Question: Can you read my poetry!? i dont have a title so that would help too!.

Its funny how I need to reminice
the loving, the hate, the laugh, and the cuddling
permanent on my mind, its my tattooed memory
what gives you the right to leave colorful ink on my mind
and walk away from my side without a good bye
Cause I can see right now clearly that its not those temporary tattoos
because trying to rub it off with my tears is not doing anything!.
But oh well , I guess i have to find another girl that`ll finish coloring!.

what do you think!? I cant think of a title!.!. lol thanks!.
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Answers:
Painful Ink!.

orrrr!.!.
"the most painful tatoo"

or something with ink and tatoo!.!.
and its good!

i like it!.
also!.!.

in the first line- the last word is spelled wrong!.!. its- reminisce!.


bravo!.

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Ok the second line all words need to end the same
either love, hate laugh cuddle or
loving hating laughing cuddling

too many words in the Cause I can see line
take out "right now" or something in there



Possible Titles


I am not a rock, I am not an Island


or
Wah, Wah, Wah

sorry, just couldn't resist

peace
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Good i liked it i can relate to it!!!

how about

"The Reminice of What Use to Be"

or

"The Tattoo of What Use to be"Www@Enter-QA@Com

You need to write something from the soul, not you're brain!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Cold Colors

not bad at all!.

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