DO YOU LIKE THIS SONG??????!
Question: DO YOU LIKE THIS SONG!?!?!?!?!?!?
ding ding ding ding
goo goo goo goo
be bop be bop
I just love you girl
I cant get over you (you) (you)
Thinking about other women makes me want to hurl (hurl) (hurl)
gooo goo goo
be bop be bop be bop
I love you big toe and your pinky
You are not very dinky
But i do not even care (care)(care)
You are my teddy bear (bear)(bear)
goo goo goo
ding ding ding
be bop be bop
I love the way you throw things
At me when your mad (mad)(mad)
At first I thought it was just a fad (fad)(fad)
But you never stopped
Neither did my love for you!. OH POP
be bop be bop
ding ding ding
goo goo goo
Do you think an ex would forgive me if i gave this song for her!? also, should i change the chorus ( the goo goo goo, ding ding ding!?)
Please dont make fun of me because this is my first song!. No rude or vulgar comments!. :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
goo goo goo goo
be bop be bop
I just love you girl
I cant get over you (you) (you)
Thinking about other women makes me want to hurl (hurl) (hurl)
gooo goo goo
be bop be bop be bop
I love you big toe and your pinky
You are not very dinky
But i do not even care (care)(care)
You are my teddy bear (bear)(bear)
goo goo goo
ding ding ding
be bop be bop
I love the way you throw things
At me when your mad (mad)(mad)
At first I thought it was just a fad (fad)(fad)
But you never stopped
Neither did my love for you!. OH POP
be bop be bop
ding ding ding
goo goo goo
Do you think an ex would forgive me if i gave this song for her!? also, should i change the chorus ( the goo goo goo, ding ding ding!?)
Please dont make fun of me because this is my first song!. No rude or vulgar comments!. :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I'm sorry but that was TERRIBLE!. I don't think your ex would forgive you!.!.!. infact I think she would chop her ears off if she heard that!. Don't even try fixing it, scrap it!.
Just out of curiosity, how long did it take you to write that!? AN HOUR!? Well I don't want to demean your songwriting skills but!.!.!.!. I have written better songs in 10 minutes!. Please go back and examine some classic love songs, and learn from that!. When writing a good love song, try NOT to focus on the person its about, but rather how the person makes you feel, k!?
Its hard to suggest love songs!.!.!. just try and find the lyrics to some of the love songs you like and try to draw from that, k!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Just out of curiosity, how long did it take you to write that!? AN HOUR!? Well I don't want to demean your songwriting skills but!.!.!.!. I have written better songs in 10 minutes!. Please go back and examine some classic love songs, and learn from that!. When writing a good love song, try NOT to focus on the person its about, but rather how the person makes you feel, k!?
Its hard to suggest love songs!.!.!. just try and find the lyrics to some of the love songs you like and try to draw from that, k!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
lol it can be cute if you sing it right!.
it's funny in a cute way!.
but maybe you should add what you learned from your mistake for why she'd be mad!? unless that's the part of "other girls make you hurl and I like your big toe!.!." hahaWww@Enter-QA@Com
it's funny in a cute way!.
but maybe you should add what you learned from your mistake for why she'd be mad!? unless that's the part of "other girls make you hurl and I like your big toe!.!." hahaWww@Enter-QA@Com
your song writing is great you can always change it to ding dong the b!.!.!.!. is mental and i do not think she will forgive sorryWww@Enter-QA@Com
Yes change the chorus!.
I think that it sounded good as an ordinary song, but not for the ex!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think that it sounded good as an ordinary song, but not for the ex!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think this is really good since it's your first song!.!.
mY first song was no where near that good
Not sure though for the exWww@Enter-QA@Com
mY first song was no where near that good
Not sure though for the exWww@Enter-QA@Com
Change the chorus!.!.!.I'm not sure if she will forgive you, but!.!.!.er nice effort!? Www@Enter-QA@Com
Not at all and she'd probably woop your *** for giving it to herWww@Enter-QA@Com
bahahaha
first answer priceless and trueWww@Enter-QA@Com
first answer priceless and trueWww@Enter-QA@Com
BURN IT!Www@Enter-QA@Com
change it!Www@Enter-QA@Com