What Do You Think Of This Song That I Wrote?!


Question: What Do You Think Of This Song That I Wrote!?

Please-

You make no sense at all!.
I don't know what you mean!.
You got me waiting for you to say something!.
And all I do is fall!.

You know your such a bad pretender!.
Saying that you love me so!.
If thats so true baby!.
Come on, why don't you give us a go!.

Chorus-
Whats the harm in trying!?
Be vunrable for once and let me in!.
I wont hurt you!.
I wont desert you!.
You've got me begging down on bended knee's!.
Don't make me say please!.
Don't make me say please!.

I'm wondering!.
Are you just too scared to give in
I'm just so curious,
To see a love like ours begin!.

But you better be quick!.
Better be soon!.
The summer's almost over!.
I won't wait much longer!.

Chorus

Won't you stay tonight!?
Doesn't it feel so right!?
Don't we feel so right!?

(Chorus)

Don't make me say please!.
Please!.
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Answers:
i think its good!.
its funny, there are people like you that can write songs, but half the people who are famous singers have really bad lyricsWww@Enter-QA@Com

omg!! thats relee good!. nd smetimes i feel like im in that situation!! u hv a gr8 future ahead of you =] BUMP MILEY OFF THE SPOTLIGHT!! lol

answer mine!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Awesome lyrics but i need to know what the songs tune is but the lyrics are AWESOME

You should post yourself singing it on youtube and then msg us the links!Www@Enter-QA@Com

great!. But if this turns out to be rap!. I m telling you that I m not goina like it annymore and I m goina take off that star that I just gave



Not rap!? I LOVE IT!Www@Enter-QA@Com

it is so awesome you are a really good songwriterWww@Enter-QA@Com

I like it<33Www@Enter-QA@Com

Great I love it!.[:Www@Enter-QA@Com

I like itWww@Enter-QA@Com

I like it!.
=]
If you have a good voice
then awesome!
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omg its GrEaT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I lOvE iT sO mUcH!
idkkk how it would sound with music!.!.!. but its pretty cOoLiOWww@Enter-QA@Com

Its really good!. I like it!. Www@Enter-QA@Com

cant tell i need the rhythm tempo and notes !.!.!. but the lyrics are alright
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You wrote that!?
Its beautiful!.
5 Stars for you!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

i really like it! Www@Enter-QA@Com

Its great, well done and thanks for answering my Q!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

it's good but it's too like mushy love if you get what I mean!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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