Any feedback on my poem????!
Question: Any feedback on my poem!?!?!?!?
I’ve waited so long
For my prince to come
A boy to care for
Someone to hug, kiss, and love
A devotion strong enough
For ours souls to entwine
And when we depart
We will look down
As we reminisce
About that magical day
We first met
I was lost in your eyes of blue
You couldn’t help but smile
After our lips first made contact
And our bodies locked
In a sweet embrace
We knew it was love
And like two turtle doves
We will never drift apart
Any help is appreciated ^_^Www@Enter-QA@Com
For my prince to come
A boy to care for
Someone to hug, kiss, and love
A devotion strong enough
For ours souls to entwine
And when we depart
We will look down
As we reminisce
About that magical day
We first met
I was lost in your eyes of blue
You couldn’t help but smile
After our lips first made contact
And our bodies locked
In a sweet embrace
We knew it was love
And like two turtle doves
We will never drift apart
Any help is appreciated ^_^Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Oh my gosh I love it so much!. You are soo talented!. Wow!. Never stop writing!. You have a real gift!.
You are definately getting a star from me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
You are definately getting a star from me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
wow, thats the gayest poem i almost readWww@Enter-QA@Com
cool =) Www@Enter-QA@Com