How about this poem????!


Question: How about this poem!?!?!?!?
This band of gold
Placed on my finger
Is a sign that
As our spirits grow old
Our love will never linger
Despite what may become
Of our outer appearances
There will be no interference
When it comes to our romance

Is it too short!? Where could I improve on!? Any comments welcome ^_^Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
i think you should ad more to it Www@Enter-QA@Com

5 words per!. sentence!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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