What do you think of the 3rd chapter of my story?!


Question: What do you think of the 3rd chapter of my story!?
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*Soon afterLEADERDUE was defeated he mysteriously awoke in the middle of nowhere*


LEADERDUDE: Where the hell am I!?Where is my Halo3!?And where is my DAEDRIC cuirass!?


GUNMAN: Quite you idiot!.The guards will hear us!?


LEADERDUDE:Guards!?What guards!?And GUNMAN how are you still alive!?Its all FRATH’s fault isnt it!?He was jus too cool and awesome that I couldnt defeat him!.!.!.!.!.!.!.


Duchess Lady: You morons awake yet!?Oh look its the loser LEADERDUDE!.So you were defeated by FRATH werent you!?I once said that I own oblivion and I once called FRATH a boy who hadnt completed Oblivion but I was wrong!.!.!.!.!.He has grown too powerful so now we must assault his fortress!.


LEADERDUDE:But I’m hungry!.!.!.!.!.


GUNMAN: You lousy kid!You want your fortress back dont you!?SO you will help us!.At this very moment MALX has gone to assassinate FRATh!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.



*Meanwhile FRATH encounters MALX*

MALX:Why hello FRATh it seems that I have come to kill you!.


FRATH: Okay but that can wait!.You wanna play GEARS OF WAR coop mode!?


MALX:SUre why not!?Wait a minute I have come to kill you and that is what I must!



*MALX attacks FRATH*


FRATH:ou will regret this!.My soul reaver will devour you!


*Epic swordfight which FRATH wins*


*MALX dies*


FRAH: It seams that LEADERDUDE is alive and he might come!.Oh well I guess I’ll have to kill him!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.again!.





TO BE CONTINUEDWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
yeah,sure! btw,ask this question in some other category related to books!.!.!.i'm sure you'll get more answers!. =)Www@Enter-QA@Com



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