Rate my poem?????????????!
Question: Rate my poem!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
I’m a hermit crab
I stay in my shell
I don’t want to reveal myself
I’m too fragile
To face the outside
I wish I never fell for you
I can’t love you like this
I need you to move on
You can’t love someone
If all they do is hide
Any comments welcome ^_^Www@Enter-QA@Com
I stay in my shell
I don’t want to reveal myself
I’m too fragile
To face the outside
I wish I never fell for you
I can’t love you like this
I need you to move on
You can’t love someone
If all they do is hide
Any comments welcome ^_^Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
10 :DWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's a good start!. I wouldn't make your points so obvious though, if I were you!. I like poems to be a bit of a mystery!. Maybe use other terms or metaphors to describe this same simple poem!. It could really build into something magnificent!Www@Enter-QA@Com
10Www@Enter-QA@Com
Good one! 100 points!.Www@Enter-QA@Com