What are your thoughts on this poem that i wrote???!
Question: YOU
I look at them and how they remind me of you
I then stare back into the past
Where time seemed to go by so fast.
Everyday without you brings me to a low,
But I cannot show that low.
I miss you!
I miss your kiss
I miss your smile
I miss your eyes
I miss your touch
Most of all I miss your love!
Coming back into the present
I find I resent
Myself for letting you go
Without you it’s a fact
They my life is one big act.
It is your love I lack
So please, please, please come back!
I love you!
I love your kiss
I love your smile
I love your eyes
I love your touch
Most of all I love your you!
By,
Tyler Gardner
Answers: YOU
I look at them and how they remind me of you
I then stare back into the past
Where time seemed to go by so fast.
Everyday without you brings me to a low,
But I cannot show that low.
I miss you!
I miss your kiss
I miss your smile
I miss your eyes
I miss your touch
Most of all I miss your love!
Coming back into the present
I find I resent
Myself for letting you go
Without you it’s a fact
They my life is one big act.
It is your love I lack
So please, please, please come back!
I love you!
I love your kiss
I love your smile
I love your eyes
I love your touch
Most of all I love your you!
By,
Tyler Gardner
It's really good, but the
"Everyday without you brings me to a low,
But I cannot show that low"
That part is a little confusing i guess.
it sounds like your repeating the sentance/line but in a diffrent matter of words.
But its really good!
It kind of sounds like a healing poem. Writing is a great form of expression to heal old wounds and to just express your feelings. I think that any form of expression is great. Everyone expresses in their own way and their is no right and wrong. I would say KEEP EXPRESSING. It does wonders for the soul.
To learn more about healing through expression,
visit http://www.self-healingexpressions.com