Would someone critique my music?!
Question: Would someone critique my music!?
The songs are on my myspace page: www!.myspace!.com/version201
I recorded my last jam session with a friend!. It's entirely instrumental, since niether of us can sing!. Most of it is improvised, so listen to the entire song before assessing (we usually start off slow)!. also try to ignore any off-beat segments or "dead ends" (i!.e!., we abruptly stop playing because one of us screws up)!. Listen to "jazzyschmazzy" or "messy" for a jazzy sound and others for a more rock/indie sound!. Personally, I think "special effin-x" (at least the last 1!.5 minutes) and "jumbles" are the best (which isn't saying much, but!.!.!.)!. Anyways, I'd like to know what you think--how we could improve, if we sound like we're "ripping off" another artist, etc!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I recorded my last jam session with a friend!. It's entirely instrumental, since niether of us can sing!. Most of it is improvised, so listen to the entire song before assessing (we usually start off slow)!. also try to ignore any off-beat segments or "dead ends" (i!.e!., we abruptly stop playing because one of us screws up)!. Listen to "jazzyschmazzy" or "messy" for a jazzy sound and others for a more rock/indie sound!. Personally, I think "special effin-x" (at least the last 1!.5 minutes) and "jumbles" are the best (which isn't saying much, but!.!.!.)!. Anyways, I'd like to know what you think--how we could improve, if we sound like we're "ripping off" another artist, etc!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Very good!. I like "special effin-x" and "messy" the most!. They could use some work for example talking while playing the music!.!.!. Other wise keep practicing and you got it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
it needs some work but you got amazing potential fo shoWww@Enter-QA@Com
its okayWww@Enter-QA@Com