What do you think of these lyrics? Part 2?!
Question: What do you think of these lyrics!? Part 2!?
Okay, so i thought of some new ones!. Decided to delete my other question!. Thank you to the people who answered it though :)
Glittering gold the hands
You hold out so willingly
Just like the glowing sands
That never wash away
And you, you are
The satin waves
That smoulder the opal bar
The sky of diamonds
Flicker in your favour
Like stars secret bonds
The azure sky, higherWww@Enter-QA@Com
Glittering gold the hands
You hold out so willingly
Just like the glowing sands
That never wash away
And you, you are
The satin waves
That smoulder the opal bar
The sky of diamonds
Flicker in your favour
Like stars secret bonds
The azure sky, higherWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I really like them!. They beautifully paint a picture!. I like your name as well!. Ava, that's my daughter's name!. Well, actually her full name is Avalynn!. But I like the lyrics! Careful, someone might steal those!Www@Enter-QA@Com
May I!? This is about someone thinking out loud thanking the sun for it's benevolence!. A definite Steely Dan song!. I picture smooth horns and tempered strings over a light uptempo groove with Donald Fagan singing in his guttural tone of cynicism accented by jazz piano virtuoso!.!.!.
Golden Sun
Glittering gold hands
Held out so willingly
Miles of bleach burning sands
In ultravilolet hue,
I dared my naked eyes
To gaze upon your wonders
Little children laugh and play
When you come shining through
And you, you are
An Approaching amber wave
That smoulders the opal bar
Why birds and bees give chase
Stars flicker in your favour
When half worlds fall sleep
As azure skies play saviours
To the secrets that you keep
We all must feel the fire
Sauteed by golden sun
From bird upon a wire
From waters life begun
We need you golden sun
The unlikeliest of burdens
Asked of this burning star
To grow what once was barren
By your celestial power
A yellow melodrama
Clouds atmosphere parade
A flower's fresh aroma
The trees give calming shade
And you, you are
An Approaching amber wave
That smoulders the opal bar
Into a creamy satin haze
Stars flicker in your favour
When half worlds fall sleep
As azure skies play saviours
To the secrets that you keep
We all must feel the fire
Sauteed by golden sun
From bird upon a wire
From waters life begun
We need you golden sunWww@Enter-QA@Com
Golden Sun
Glittering gold hands
Held out so willingly
Miles of bleach burning sands
In ultravilolet hue,
I dared my naked eyes
To gaze upon your wonders
Little children laugh and play
When you come shining through
And you, you are
An Approaching amber wave
That smoulders the opal bar
Why birds and bees give chase
Stars flicker in your favour
When half worlds fall sleep
As azure skies play saviours
To the secrets that you keep
We all must feel the fire
Sauteed by golden sun
From bird upon a wire
From waters life begun
We need you golden sun
The unlikeliest of burdens
Asked of this burning star
To grow what once was barren
By your celestial power
A yellow melodrama
Clouds atmosphere parade
A flower's fresh aroma
The trees give calming shade
And you, you are
An Approaching amber wave
That smoulders the opal bar
Into a creamy satin haze
Stars flicker in your favour
When half worlds fall sleep
As azure skies play saviours
To the secrets that you keep
We all must feel the fire
Sauteed by golden sun
From bird upon a wire
From waters life begun
We need you golden sunWww@Enter-QA@Com
its like a song for a dramatic soap bar commercialWww@Enter-QA@Com
there good, there good!Www@Enter-QA@Com
it looks good to read at!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
there great u have real talent!. Keep going!. Hey can u comment on mine!?Www@Enter-QA@Com