Do you think my song is good!
Question: Do you think my song is good
use with apologize instrumental!.!.!. imma beginner so no rude opinions
i aint holdin on your rope
like timbaland imma give you a shock
i aint hearin what you say
as you can see im leavin you now
i hated you with a fire red
now im starting toooo
love youuu
you said sorry like an angel
never would of thought of u
buit im afraid!.!.!.!.
[chorus]
its to late im leavin now
it to late
so get your closthes up out my house
its to late
leavin with the sorrow in my heart
it waz nuttin new
but tell me would you love the feeling
if i was cheating on you
i loved u like nobody else
in the world but you
and you sayy
sorry and you didnt know
that he was gay
but im afraid
[chorus]
[hook]
i neva would of thought it waz you
i neva would of known it waz you
i leave the house for one second your cheating on who
[chorus]
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i aint holdin on your rope
like timbaland imma give you a shock
i aint hearin what you say
as you can see im leavin you now
i hated you with a fire red
now im starting toooo
love youuu
you said sorry like an angel
never would of thought of u
buit im afraid!.!.!.!.
[chorus]
its to late im leavin now
it to late
so get your closthes up out my house
its to late
leavin with the sorrow in my heart
it waz nuttin new
but tell me would you love the feeling
if i was cheating on you
i loved u like nobody else
in the world but you
and you sayy
sorry and you didnt know
that he was gay
but im afraid
[chorus]
[hook]
i neva would of thought it waz you
i neva would of known it waz you
i leave the house for one second your cheating on who
[chorus]
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Answers:
Amazing lyrics!. continue the passion!. GREAT lyrics for a beginner! AwesomeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Hi,
Those were good lyrics, but they could use a little more rhythm on some lines !. The song could use more rhyming!. So for the most part it was good, just read through your song again and change some of the words to make them make more sense and have more of your words rhyme!. if it is hard, find the last or 2nd to last word it a line and match it with the last or 2nd to last word on then under the first line!.!.!.!.!.!.!. hope this helps!.
Work on it and your song could be great
nice jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
Those were good lyrics, but they could use a little more rhythm on some lines !. The song could use more rhyming!. So for the most part it was good, just read through your song again and change some of the words to make them make more sense and have more of your words rhyme!. if it is hard, find the last or 2nd to last word it a line and match it with the last or 2nd to last word on then under the first line!.!.!.!.!.!.!. hope this helps!.
Work on it and your song could be great
nice jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
i think its good!. for now i guess!. im sorry its just that sometimes before you know its a good song you have to listen to the rhythm, beat, tune with ofcourse your lyrics!. but for now, as ive said, its a good song! good job and more power to yah!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
they are really really really really amazing lyrics!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Some lines don't really rhyme try to be appropriateWww@Enter-QA@Com
yeeaahhh XDWww@Enter-QA@Com
Smashing - really good!. You should be proudWww@Enter-QA@Com
Not bad, it's fine, but I think some lines don't fit in the music!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yea but it can be a little betterWww@Enter-QA@Com
dude!.,!. it's ayt for a beginner but u can still improve it :D!.,!.,Www@Enter-QA@Com