Check out my first full length Y!A rap?!
Question: Check out my first full length Y!A rap!?
all right so i posted some other raps on here but this is my first one with a hook so let me know what you think
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
when it comes to life and death i couldn't care less
I know gods there for me but hes no bullet broof vest
what are some of the great things you did
can you tell me what the meaning of life is
what if all the answers were in plain sight
beaming down on you like daylight
what if hate was the fifth element
and satan was the only one tellin it
what if you had no friends
would you still try to make amends
what if you were about to die from starvation
while you were told to use in moderation
we have children dying for rain
while others cut themselves to dull the pain
who knows whats true when we live in the land of the insaine
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred and ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
Everybody around me is a junkie
Going around sayin come on front me
Crying about how they got it rough
Shut up and man up life is tough
And it ain’t gonna change till we say enough
And they ain’t gonna be happy till we all in cuffs
Where I’m from your blessed if you leave with stitches
And for all you sniches you’ll wine up in ditches
I don’t care about some record label
We tryin to keep food on the table
Let me ask are you ready willing and able
This **** is epic but it’s far from a fable
I’m seeing the grim reaper in the mirror
caution objects are closer than they appear
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
I think about the hurt and I look at the scars
I put my heart and soul into all my bars
They say you reap what you sow
I got my mind body and spirit in flow
try closing you mouth and open your mind
Keep your body unsoiled like a new baby nine
When life is troublesome I sit and reflect it
And wonder should I go out and make it hectic
I calm down and I meditate
use the earth to medicate
I don’t fall for all the lies and the deception
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred and ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
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Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
when it comes to life and death i couldn't care less
I know gods there for me but hes no bullet broof vest
what are some of the great things you did
can you tell me what the meaning of life is
what if all the answers were in plain sight
beaming down on you like daylight
what if hate was the fifth element
and satan was the only one tellin it
what if you had no friends
would you still try to make amends
what if you were about to die from starvation
while you were told to use in moderation
we have children dying for rain
while others cut themselves to dull the pain
who knows whats true when we live in the land of the insaine
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred and ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
Everybody around me is a junkie
Going around sayin come on front me
Crying about how they got it rough
Shut up and man up life is tough
And it ain’t gonna change till we say enough
And they ain’t gonna be happy till we all in cuffs
Where I’m from your blessed if you leave with stitches
And for all you sniches you’ll wine up in ditches
I don’t care about some record label
We tryin to keep food on the table
Let me ask are you ready willing and able
This **** is epic but it’s far from a fable
I’m seeing the grim reaper in the mirror
caution objects are closer than they appear
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
I think about the hurt and I look at the scars
I put my heart and soul into all my bars
They say you reap what you sow
I got my mind body and spirit in flow
try closing you mouth and open your mind
Keep your body unsoiled like a new baby nine
When life is troublesome I sit and reflect it
And wonder should I go out and make it hectic
I calm down and I meditate
use the earth to medicate
I don’t fall for all the lies and the deception
Sit down let me tell you about life and death
Pray for better days but I don’t hold my breath
True g’s are a dying bred and ain’t many left
Getting health problems from all this stress
If your down for the cause better have a vest
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Answers:
WOW this is really good!.
Some lines could be worked on a little more, but it's reallly really good!.
I know gods there for me but hes no bullet **broof** vest
**is it suppose to be proof!?**
just letting you know some stuff is spelt wrong lol but its good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Some lines could be worked on a little more, but it's reallly really good!.
I know gods there for me but hes no bullet **broof** vest
**is it suppose to be proof!?**
just letting you know some stuff is spelt wrong lol but its good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
WOW!.!.!.YOUR REALLY GETTING GOOD!.I CAN SEE YOU IN THE MUSIC INDUSTRY AS A FAMOUS SONG WRITER!.GOOD LUCK, YOU CAN DO IT!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
your okay nothing special content is abit weak!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
To long just came from school don't feel like reading!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Quit!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it!.!.!.just alittle!.!.!.need some changesWww@Enter-QA@Com
okay okay you did ya thing and you gets props
gud jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
gud jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
i think its ku but i think u shud change a few words but it kuWww@Enter-QA@Com
i gave you my feed back on the other one!.Www@Enter-QA@Com