New rap song (need feedback)?!
Question: New rap song (need feedback)!?
http://www!.filebrella!.com/download/f4273!.!.!.
this is version 2 of something I put up a few weeks ago!.!. I tried to put more "ummph" in my voice, and flow a little better!.!.
lmk how you like it!.!.
ps this still isnt the final versionWww@Enter-QA@Com
this is version 2 of something I put up a few weeks ago!.!. I tried to put more "ummph" in my voice, and flow a little better!.!.
lmk how you like it!.!.
ps this still isnt the final versionWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
you are on the right track!.!. overall!.!. i would say it is a 4 out of 10!.!. i think it might be the production and well i love music and i might be going a little to hard on you but it was just not good man!.!. however!.!.!. i like some of your lyrics!.!.!. it would be nice if did not try to sound like Wayne to much!.!. too many punlines (or atleast trying to be punchlines) your song needs flow man!.!. an i am not talking about your flow as an delivery i am talking about how the whole song gets structured!.!. your rap on here is better off acapella and in a little huddle session not for a song!.!.!. but honestly i like the risk you take to put this stuff out for everyone to listen to!.!. you have a lot of potential,,!.!.!. i would honestly not give up at all!.!.!. also your second voice in the background is suppose to help you!.!. you need to learn when to place a second vocal to your punch line!.!.!. i really realy hope you take this as real structured judgement!.!. i am not trying to put your down at all!.!. i am trying to bring the best out of you!.!.!. cause i like rap and i would want rap to go to levels that we did not think where possible and i want everybody to become great rappers so we have more talent and the bar gets set bigger!. good luckWww@Enter-QA@Com
It needs stronger bass!. Don't just pump the frequencies, use an EQ and adjust the bands so that it works on a variety of speaker setups!. It works when I listen to it on a system with a subwoofer, but through stereo channels it's very trebly, too much so for a rap song!. It needs heavy mixing work and good mastering!. It's also a bit repetetive!. The music itself is not bad, if just a bit cliche!.
The vocals!.!. eh, I didn't like them!. The random background snippets sound very awkward, and your voice is extremely choppy!. It doesn't flow too well, and you sound like you have no emotion!.
I'm not really a big rap fan, but I'm an avid recording artist!. Audio quality wise, it needs work!. Musically, your voice and flow need adjustment and emotion!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
The vocals!.!. eh, I didn't like them!. The random background snippets sound very awkward, and your voice is extremely choppy!. It doesn't flow too well, and you sound like you have no emotion!.
I'm not really a big rap fan, but I'm an avid recording artist!. Audio quality wise, it needs work!. Musically, your voice and flow need adjustment and emotion!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I had a hard time finding my delivery too!. But after awhile it will get easier!. There is no passion in your voice!. Feel what you are saying, and rap as is you have a crown in front of you!. You just need more experience!. Check out my music page!.
http://www!.myspace!.com/lyricalphase
Mines not done either!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
http://www!.myspace!.com/lyricalphase
Mines not done either!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's alright
Maybe the final version will be betterWww@Enter-QA@Com
Maybe the final version will be betterWww@Enter-QA@Com
the beat is sick, but the vocals sound like it was made from a little kids tape recorder!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
not feelin it!.
but then again its not my style!.
yo voice sounds like the PC speech thing!.
put more enthusiasm in it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
but then again its not my style!.
yo voice sounds like the PC speech thing!.
put more enthusiasm in it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Are you white!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
its just okayWww@Enter-QA@Com
not to bad dude!.!.!.but I ain't no expertWww@Enter-QA@Com
its okWww@Enter-QA@Com
Just let it go, I ain't feelin itWww@Enter-QA@Com
sounds like garbage then again my speakers dont work
now they do, it sucksWww@Enter-QA@Com
now they do, it sucksWww@Enter-QA@Com