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More Than Friends
Verse: 1
I thought of you laying in the morning dew
Laying by my side with me looking in your eyes
I knew that we were meant to be
When I first saw you looking right at me
Bridge: 1
I knew I needed you here day and night
Everything would have gone alright
As long as you were by my side
Chorus: 1
We'll always be more than friends
Our hearts will never be apart
I need you here until the end
You will always remain in my heart
Verse: 2
You know I’d give up anything that you want me to
I would change in everyway just for you to stay
Another night I go to sleep
With another smile I’m sure to keep
Verse: 3
Now I go back thinking of you
Thinking of the times when you thought of me too
I’m hoping that you would feel the same way I do
All I need you say to me
Is I feel the same way about you
Or
Verse: 3
Your eyes have me lost
Stealing my precious heart
I have my fingers crossed
That you would take my last breath
Chorus: 1
We'll always be more than friends
Our hearts will never be apart
I need you here until the end
You will always remain in my heart
Bridge: 2
I knew I needed you here day and night
Everything would have gone alright
As long as you were by my side
Chorus: 1
We'll always be more than friends
Our hearts will never be apart
I need you here until the end
You will always remain in my heart
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Verse: 1
I thought of you laying in the morning dew
Laying by my side with me looking in your eyes
I knew that we were meant to be
When I first saw you looking right at me
Bridge: 1
I knew I needed you here day and night
Everything would have gone alright
As long as you were by my side
Chorus: 1
We'll always be more than friends
Our hearts will never be apart
I need you here until the end
You will always remain in my heart
Verse: 2
You know I’d give up anything that you want me to
I would change in everyway just for you to stay
Another night I go to sleep
With another smile I’m sure to keep
Verse: 3
Now I go back thinking of you
Thinking of the times when you thought of me too
I’m hoping that you would feel the same way I do
All I need you say to me
Is I feel the same way about you
Or
Verse: 3
Your eyes have me lost
Stealing my precious heart
I have my fingers crossed
That you would take my last breath
Chorus: 1
We'll always be more than friends
Our hearts will never be apart
I need you here until the end
You will always remain in my heart
Bridge: 2
I knew I needed you here day and night
Everything would have gone alright
As long as you were by my side
Chorus: 1
We'll always be more than friends
Our hearts will never be apart
I need you here until the end
You will always remain in my heart
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Answers:
I liked it !. Except for verse 1!. everything else was good!.!.!.!.!. ok do what i did i needed a beat to make sure it sounded good so sing this song with the beat of come on get higher by matt nathanson!. sounds good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Oh My god! That's a great song! Deffinitly a 10/10 ;) great jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
Great imagination!.!. good jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
the beginning was good, but the always in my heart stuff is cliche'dWww@Enter-QA@Com
i like it good job!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Wow, I'm impressed :) Very nicely written!. I'd rate it a 10!. :) Keep up the good work :)Www@Enter-QA@Com