What do you think of these lyrics? Does anyone have a title for them?!
Question: What do you think of these lyrics!? Does anyone have a title for them!?
I wrote a song, here it is:
shooting stars don't work for me
candles just betray
the only prayer i have tonight
runs through my blood today
will I go away
or will you let me stay
please let me stay
oh let me stay
a star studded sky and a
soft spoken sigh and an
angry bitter word called hate!.!.!.!.!.
i can't tell wishes from whispers
blood from blisters
I don't even recognize your face
and who's to blame!?
will I go away
or will you let me stay
please let me stay
oh let me stay
the answers running out your door
to recognize no more
the pain and hate that led your fate
the lies are dripping from your pores
shooting stars don't work for me
candles just betray
the only prayer I have tonight
runs through my blood today
well that's it! what do you think!?
I can't think of a title though, so does anyone have any suggestions!?
Feel free to say it was sh*t!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
shooting stars don't work for me
candles just betray
the only prayer i have tonight
runs through my blood today
will I go away
or will you let me stay
please let me stay
oh let me stay
a star studded sky and a
soft spoken sigh and an
angry bitter word called hate!.!.!.!.!.
i can't tell wishes from whispers
blood from blisters
I don't even recognize your face
and who's to blame!?
will I go away
or will you let me stay
please let me stay
oh let me stay
the answers running out your door
to recognize no more
the pain and hate that led your fate
the lies are dripping from your pores
shooting stars don't work for me
candles just betray
the only prayer I have tonight
runs through my blood today
well that's it! what do you think!?
I can't think of a title though, so does anyone have any suggestions!?
Feel free to say it was sh*t!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Condescending skyWww@Enter-QA@Com
sounds like it could be a hxc song!.!. not poppish at all
you could name it something random like
"i'll rip the whisper from your throat"
lol!.!. or just name it "stay"
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you could name it something random like
"i'll rip the whisper from your throat"
lol!.!. or just name it "stay"
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Many times the title of a song comes from a phrase found in the chorus!.!.!.
I kind of like
"Candles just betray"Www@Enter-QA@Com
very good song!. how bout, i feel or will you listen or let me stay or lat me stay (in your life) hope that helpsWww@Enter-QA@Com
nice song
uh
Let Me Stay!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
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Let Me Stay!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Shooting stars can wait, but I cant wait to stay
or
Shooting stars can wait for me, but I cant wait to stay!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
or
Shooting stars can wait for me, but I cant wait to stay!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Maybe, "Will I go away, or Stay" or maybe "Let Me stay"Www@Enter-QA@Com