Do you Like my Song? PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!?!
Question: Do you Like my Song!? PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!!!!?
It is called Forever and On!. I am only 13 years old!. Do you think it is good!?
With every step he takes
Your heart just breaks and breaks
Is there anyway around this pain-yeah
You just want to disappear
Don’t want him to be near-you
Far away as possible
I need some happy endings, please
At least with me- this time I see
A new beginning to another’s end
Round and round we go again
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the stars lose their glow
Just you and I forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you forever
Forever and on
Me and you…forever yeah
We are one now you see
What you-you need in me
Not just another wanna-be -yeah
I don’t even think that we
Weren’t ever meant to be
Not possible
It’s not possible
And I am flying with you
In the sky forever blue
Above all that we can see
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the sun looses it’s glow
Just you and I forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you- forever
Forever and on
No need to wait
Another day
Your all I need and I’m all you need
It’s a perfect melody
Mixed with a harmony
That’s me and you, you know it’s true-o-o
Yeah-----
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the stars lose their glow
Just you and I-forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you-forever
Forever and on
Me and you, forever and on---
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the stars loose their glow
Just you and I-forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you-forever
Forever and onWww@Enter-QA@Com
With every step he takes
Your heart just breaks and breaks
Is there anyway around this pain-yeah
You just want to disappear
Don’t want him to be near-you
Far away as possible
I need some happy endings, please
At least with me- this time I see
A new beginning to another’s end
Round and round we go again
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the stars lose their glow
Just you and I forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you forever
Forever and on
Me and you…forever yeah
We are one now you see
What you-you need in me
Not just another wanna-be -yeah
I don’t even think that we
Weren’t ever meant to be
Not possible
It’s not possible
And I am flying with you
In the sky forever blue
Above all that we can see
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the sun looses it’s glow
Just you and I forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you- forever
Forever and on
No need to wait
Another day
Your all I need and I’m all you need
It’s a perfect melody
Mixed with a harmony
That’s me and you, you know it’s true-o-o
Yeah-----
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the stars lose their glow
Just you and I-forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you-forever
Forever and on
Me and you, forever and on---
Hold me close
Don’t let go
Until the stars loose their glow
Just you and I-forever
Take my hand
It’s nothing new
Just me and you-forever
Forever and onWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Hello, my name is Castity Lynne, I actually am a song writer and producer!. For your age I think its an excellent song, you have real potential!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
For only 13 i'd say that this is very good, if it had a cemented tune to go with it it'd be much more creative than words on a page!. And the writing is not even the toughest part!. The actual singing is!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I LOVE THIS SONG!!!!!!! I AM A GOOD SINGER AND I STARTED SINGING THIS AND MY FRIEND HEARD IT AND SHE LOVES ITWww@Enter-QA@Com
It sounds fine to me!. Now you need to find someone willing to perform it or sing it for other people!. That is the hard part!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
WOW!.!.!.THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!. VERY BEAUTIFUL LYRICS!. YOUR VERY TALENTED AND BLESSED WITH A GIFT FOR WRITING LYRICS!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i love it
you should be a songwriter
becuz this is a good songWww@Enter-QA@Com
you should be a songwriter
becuz this is a good songWww@Enter-QA@Com
its cute!. i absolutely adore cheesy love songs!. :)Www@Enter-QA@Com