What do you think of this poem good or bad?!
Question: What do you think of this poem good or bad!?
It's too late
My life meant nothing!.
but now it is too late!.
morning never came for me!.
If only you were there for me!.
If only you had loved me!.
If only I had loved you!.
You could have saved me!.
but you choose to hate me!.
Now you say you loved me!.
but now is too late!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
My life meant nothing!.
but now it is too late!.
morning never came for me!.
If only you were there for me!.
If only you had loved me!.
If only I had loved you!.
You could have saved me!.
but you choose to hate me!.
Now you say you loved me!.
but now is too late!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I would add some metaphors or something to the poem - it's sortof blunt!. also, I like to think of a poem as an extremely short story, so don't always let us know where it's going!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Awsome!
This poem awsome as well,maybe you should use it, it sounds like yours,but maybe a revised way lolz
My life has ment nothing,
Morning never came,
darkness has always appered
since the day you told me
something strong,the word hate in a
sentence,now you tell me you love me
but now its too late
you could of saved me
you could of loved me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
This poem awsome as well,maybe you should use it, it sounds like yours,but maybe a revised way lolz
My life has ment nothing,
Morning never came,
darkness has always appered
since the day you told me
something strong,the word hate in a
sentence,now you tell me you love me
but now its too late
you could of saved me
you could of loved me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i work allot with poetry and it is bad!! yeah its like you put to much me!! like you hate me, i like me, you know me, i hate me, dog hate me, dog poop on me, aah barney eat me, but i love you<that is how youre poem goes you gotta change it!!!look at mine:::i see the bird with a broken wing, i feel the young boys sorrow, i taste the good when life is bad, i touch the hand of a young boy, i hear the rain touch my skin,i whisper ito a young boy ear and say i love you,i am a friend!.!.!.
yeah i use i cuz it makes sence your doesnt sorry try better!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah i use i cuz it makes sence your doesnt sorry try better!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its awesome, but being honest, i don't like the line
If only you had loved me!.
If only I had loved you!.
if you just changed that part it would be amazing!!! did you write that!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
If only you had loved me!.
If only I had loved you!.
if you just changed that part it would be amazing!!! did you write that!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
omg i love it, mind if i use it in a song!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think you need counseling, but your poem is good in that it expresses how you feel!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Too pessimistic!. MORE OPTIMISIM!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
um!.!.!.!. suicidal much!?!?
DON"T DO IT!! DON"T DO IT!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
DON"T DO IT!! DON"T DO IT!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Kinda miserable, but I like the Idea!. Try re-arranging it a bit!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
bad, sorryWww@Enter-QA@Com
its really good but it sounds regetfullWww@Enter-QA@Com
it's okay not greatWww@Enter-QA@Com
Ooooohhhhh!.!.!.!.!. I like it! That's really good!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Its good! I feel what you mean!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
All it needs is "Goodbye cold cruel world" for the last line!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
its really good
i like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
i like itWww@Enter-QA@Com